It is very important to have the knowledge as to what is happening around the world. In every century, knowledge has always been blissful for everyone, no matter whether a person is being affected by it or not. There are many people who do not think likewise because they believe that their life is not being influenced by it and so it is a total waste of time to keep track of news daily. But in my opinion it is extremely necessary for the following reasons.
First, if a person is well aware of the incidences occurring around the world then it will definitely help him/her to prepare for any unknown problem. Life is quite unpredictable and full of adventures; one can never anticipate what is going to happen next minute. There are many accidents that have taken place in many people’s life suddenly when they were not prepared for it and thus they had to face a lot difficulties in recovering from miss happening for example one of the most terrible tsunami that occurred in Japan in 2011. Thousands of people died in it just because they were not ready for such a devastating thing. So, if they knew it about is forehand, there are chances that some of them could have been saved. Thus it is mandatory to update one’s knowledge often.
Second, it is also crucial for the development of a society worldwide. There are people who do not give stress to gain knowledge about various things like computer, internet and about much recent invention in technology. This results in their downfall gradually and they are not able to keep pace with rest of the world. I can recall that recently I got an opportunity to visit an island in South Africa and meet a tribal community, where everyone was uneducated and they were totally isolated from the rest of the civilized society. After spending some time I realized how miserable these tribal people were, they did not have any civic sense nor did they have proper resources to live a decent life. Therefore, It is worth spending time to keep oneself aware and updated.
To recapitulate, I would like to say that knowledge not only enlightens one’s mind and help to become a better human being but it also contributes in making life simpler and healthier to live. There is no harm in collecting information about what is happening around the world because I think it is interesting way to develop one’s mind.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'likewise', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'i think', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.177105831533 0.229887763892 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.196544276458 0.158761421928 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0885529157667 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0712742980562 0.046263068375 154% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0712742980562 0.0685040099705 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112311015119 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0475161987041 0.0351676179071 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61296046861 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036717062635 0.0309702414327 119% => OK
Particles: 0.00215982721382 0.00188951952338 114% => OK
Determiners: 0.0691144708423 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0107991360691 0.0209618222197 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0215982721382 0.0139019557991 155% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2389.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 417.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72901678657 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302158273381 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223021582734 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170263788969 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122302158273 0.112833075102 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61296046861 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537170263789 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.5378706379 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1666666667 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0134541193 48.84282405 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.722222222 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.644075263715 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.46882494 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 0.993630573248 1.45489161554 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345289094663 0.300154397459 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.092646193078 0.103427244359 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0486973373916 0.0752933317313 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491088277803 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124815241068 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148654751436 0.114077575197 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786453448021 0.0781384742642 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.409370461095 0.336927656856 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0812671008387 0.067059652881 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261142455646 0.210909579961 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557905628354 0.0618886996521 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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