I can be argued that schools should inculcate practical skills training in their curricula along with academic subjects. This essay agrees with the above viewpoint and sheds some light on its avantages for school-going children.
Practical skills enable a person to walk through his life in a smart way. It is necessary in today's world to be able to manage one's household and finances with caution and planning. For example, schools which have extra-curricular classes on bank accounts are shown to instill a sense of practical approach towards financial management in their pupils that undoubtedly works in latter's favour and gives them a headstart once they start earning.
Training school children in practical skills also makes them independent and confident to take on life outside school. A student well-versed in general practical skills has a more adventurous outlook on life and is not totally dependent on another person when faced with an unforseen problem. He remains calm, composed, and thinks logically in such a situation. For instance, a boy, who has been educated about car maintenance in his school, when faced with an accidental tire-puncture of their family car during a trip would be up for the challenge to replace the tire quickly rather than being panicked out of his wits.
In conclusion, this essay, by illustrating how a practical approach to life encouraged during school is wholly advantageous for a child, advocates incorporation of practical skills training along with academic studies in school curricula.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a smart way" with adverb for "smart"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nable a person to walk through his life in a smart way. It is necessary in todays world to be ...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ry in todays world to be able to manage ones household and finances with caution and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31428571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90794485395 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636734693878 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3515942359 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.2 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32002718957 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124828532867 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606157378751 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203229974666 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429770333328 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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