Tpo 47
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today's human life faces with various changes all around the world. Revolution, war or argues of two candidates of an election are possible first-page titles of most newspapers. Some hold the view that following news helps people to have a better view of their life, while other believe that knowing worldwide is not recommended to people. I strongly agree with later group opinion that reading news has undeniable downsides.
First, soul health faces with danger by reading the world wide news. In fact, most articles on newspapers report war or arguing several countries on an issue. Reading this type enhances the chance of depression of people, since they conclude that their peace situation is not permanent. Being worry about possible dangers reduces person tendency for success, so the chance of depression increases on the person. In addition, some news reports crime that watching them is not recommended for teenagers. For instance, watching a seance that a person kills someone by knife will not be removed from a teenager's memory easily. This memory may cause that the teenager becomes a criminal one day, since watching violence increases cruelty in the person.
Second, becoming informed about the world's news is time-consuming. Indeed, more than 200 countries exist that reading at leat 1 article about each of them demands at least 2 hours. The time that a person spends for reading news is not the only thing that he wastes. In fact, most of the businessman rely on changes that have occurred in different regions of the world for predicting the future changes in their investigation. However, some writers have their own tendency to reporting a news which can mislead the readers. Accordingly, reading news may mislead a business man in his decision. An inappropriate decision wastes his time and his investigation.
In conclusion, I think that following news' downsides weight is more than its upsides. It faces person's soul health in danger. In addition, getting informed about world's news wastes person's time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...health faces with danger by reading the world wide news. In fact, most articles on newspa...
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Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...health faces with danger by reading the world wide news. In fact, most articles on newspa...
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Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ading the world wide news. In fact, most articles on newspapers report war or arg...
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Line 2, column 599, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
...one by knife will not be removed from a teenagers memory easily. This memory may cause th...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...n. Second, becoming informed about the worlds news is time-consuming. Indeed, more th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'at least', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.305177111717 0.229887763892 133% => OK
Verbs: 0.160762942779 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0626702997275 0.0866891130778 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0326975476839 0.046263068375 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408719346049 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.160762942779 0.118717715034 135% => OK
Participles: 0.0653950953678 0.0351676179071 186% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.66377942871 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00817438692098 0.0309702414327 26% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0899182561308 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0108991825613 0.0209618222197 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00544959128065 0.0139019557991 39% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2031.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 330.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15454545455 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39696969697 0.338922669872 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309090909091 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187878787879 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112121212121 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66377942871 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 63.1938414815 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7142857143 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2341025323 48.84282405 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 46.6233766234 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.26744186047 1.45489161554 156% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212945533 0.300154397459 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0989034325117 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0840456873253 0.0752933317313 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.425136267074 0.497263757937 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111159130557 0.151897553556 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727494725859 0.114077575197 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468513273996 0.0781384742642 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308813695264 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0643942697585 0.067059652881 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141355377503 0.210909579961 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367609730219 0.0618886996521 59% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8870967742 25% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 8.42114695341 24% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.75985663082 362% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.