Nowadays, due to the great development happened in the world, so much task has been emerged for individuals to be done. Variety of choices are available for us to be made in order to shape our life. However what can be a guidance light in these hustle and bustle. Obviously, planning is one of the suitable tools to help us have an well-managed life. I do support this idea that plan and organize are indispensable for people, specially younger ones. As following, I provide a couple of reasons to advocate my opinion.
First, it's worth to mention that planning and finding a proper way to organize the different parts of the life can avoid wasting time. In fact, a person who has a plan is well aware that when is appropriate to do what. He can do all the task in the proper time and he would not lose even a single hour. Hence, time is saved for more task to be done and also nothing he has not lost and waste the time.For example, when I was preparing myself for TOEFL , at first, I didn't organized my task also didn't have any plan to start from what book or how much of the book should be read per day. Consequently, as time passed and lost a lot of days that could be crucial and determining in my process of progression. There for, this taught me that if I had a plan I would use the time and days in a better way. However, it became a good experience for me to organize my time and task after that.
Secondly, it can come to mind that avoiding to have plan and schedule can readily bring about to forget to do some significant work. Having a plan means that you have a comprehensive schema of the whole things you have to do and besides the available time you have for them. Though, you would not lose any task that might be disguised in the flood of important works, Specially, when you are pretty busy and stuck in a hard situation that has kept your mind involved.
For example, my husband was going through expanding his firm. He was so busy with a plenty of different issues. He didn't have time to even have meal with me let alone other things. In spite of all these occupations he managed to spend a specific time in the day to organize and enhance his plan. As a result, he could successfully do his task and the great deal of expansion without losing any single work. According to him, he owed it to his plans.
To sum it up, the significance of having a plan and organization in life is cleared above. Actually, as we all know that time flies, a plan can help us not to waste it and exploit it properly. Even more, by having a plan we can identify our tasks and don't lose them because of mind occupation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in fact, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29175050302 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44153008917 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486921529175 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.749580511 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.32 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.88 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187963446533 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588395243244 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503724887406 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122268186839 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389160944901 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.