Planning and organizing go a long way. There is no doubt in my mind that nowadays life is very complicated and therefore young generation should have the ability to organize and plan. This attribute not only helps young children to have an easy life, but also they learn the key elements of success at an early age. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, these days life is so busy and hectic, people don't find time to spend time with friends and family. A proper scheduled in life makes your life comfortable and put you at ease. For instance, a few years back, I joined a fast-paced corporate firm soon after my graduation. I was just out of the college and knew very little about how to effectively plan my day to day life. My days were crazy, I could barely find time to spend with my family and as a result, my workplace took a toll on my personal life. My relationship faltered. However, my colleague who was senior to me provided me guidance on how to balance and organize my daily schedule so that I can balance both my personal and professional life. I took his advice very seriously and acted accordingly. To my surprise, soon I was able to keep up with my work and also I had sufficient time to spend with my kids and wife. This example clearly shows how important it is to have proper planning in life and every teenager should have this trait to lead a comfortable life.
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 60
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...ollowing essay. To begin with, these days life is so busy and hectic, people dont...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...days life is so busy and hectic, people dont find time to spend time with friends an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, no doubt, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 268.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41044776119 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49266019895 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.933621015 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4285714286 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168995208423 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650556945828 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446726915778 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146813261669 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025385658191 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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