Some people prefer to do not organize to advance their activities because they think that this lead to reduce their freedom, whereas I strongly agree with the statement, planning your daily activities is critical in order to get all the important commitments done at the end of the day.
First of all, the organization is very important in every situation, but in modern life, it is becoming critical if you want to carry on all your duty and find some time for leisure activities. For example, when I was in secondary school, my mother used to prepare my backpack, food, and a shirt and trousers for the next school day, the night before. This is because in the mornings she had to do so many other things such as prepare breakfast and tiding up the house. She worked until late during that period and she wanted to have time left for reading and relaxing. If she was not so well-organized, she would have never found time for herself and at the same time have the house tided up. Furthermore, I never arrived late at school, never I missed the food. She is the perfect example of organization for me.
Second, the ability to plan is also very important for students, because they have a very complex life; they have to attend classes, do practical activities and studying for the exams, in a very short period of time, if they are not well organized, they will sure lag behind those instead have planned carefully their daily activities. In my experience, when I was a university student. I began organizing very carefully all my activities when during the first semester, I had very low scores in my major. That period I was not so focused on classes, and I was not precisely planning my studies led me to get very low scores even I thought I was prepared, this is because I was not using my time efficiently. In the second semester, I began to plan and organize my day, with the results that my scores were much higher than before.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I do believe that organization and planning are essential most of the times. In particular, nowadays which our lives are always busier and our lives are frenetic and complex. A good daily plan is a key to arrive at the end of the day and get all your duty done, it does not matter if you are a parent or a student.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...studying for the exams, in a very short period of time, if they are not well organized, they w...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...anning are essential most of the times. In particular, nowadays which our lives ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52392344498 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5511468622 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1708349288 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.1875 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221551063013 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067180240019 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546662475976 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131400615786 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194798464684 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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