Friendship is considered one of the most important aspects in our lives. Nowadays, the life is very tough and we cannot live without our friends. We meet many people all day long even at work or at our daily activities. I am sure that some people agree that it is a great idea to maintain your old friends to be happy, While others would agree that it is much better to build new friendship with more new friends. However, when it comes to me I totally agree that it if more important to save your old friends to be satisfied more than get new more friends. I feel this way for two important reasons, which I will demonstrate in the following essay.
To begin with, we can trust our old friends more than new ones. Recently, we deal with many issues at our lives and we always in need to some one to share us our decisions. For instance, my cousin has his closed high school friends and he always trust him. Last year, he got a new opportunity to work in a multinational company at different state and he was totally hesitated to take the moving decision. In fact, he asked his closed friend to give him advice. This is because he trust in him so much since they were at school. Moreover, his friend advised him to take that opportunity because he was so caring about him and caring about his future. Consequently, my cousin took his friend opinion into his consideration because he rely on him. On the other hand, my cousin could not trust any one of his new friends to ask the about that decision. In fact, he thought that they could tell everyone about his secrets. As you can see, we always back to our old friends when we need any help because they knew everything about us and they always share us in bad and good news.
In addition, help that provided by old friends make us so happy. We can depend on our closed friends at any hard circumstances. For example, my brother's friend was in a hard situation and he could not pay his rent. As a result, he asked many of his new friends at dorm to lend him one thousand dollars, but they refused to give him anything. Nevertheless, when this friend asked my brother to borrow one thousand dollars from him and he promised that he will return it after a certin time, my brother agreed. Moreover, my brother offered him more money because he trust him so much and he know that his friend is very commetted. So, my brother's friend paid for the rent and he became so happy. However, his new friends made him so upset due to their bad situation. This experience taught me that the close friends can trust each other and they can help each other.
In sum, I totally convinced that we have to keep our relationship so closed with our old mates. This is because we can trust them and we can tell them anything about our personal lives, and because they always provide us with a good help once we need which make us live a good quality of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...s at our lives and we always in need to some one to share us our decisions. For instance...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'trusts'.
Suggestion: trusts
...losed high school friends and he always trust him. Last year, he got a new opportunit...
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Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'trusts'.
Suggestion: trusts
... to give him advice. This is because he trust in him so much since they were at schoo...
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Line 3, column 733, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'relies'.
Suggestion: relies
...inion into his consideration because he rely on him. On the other hand, my cousin c...
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Line 3, column 764, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cause he rely on him. On the other hand, my cousin could not trust any one of his...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'trusts'.
Suggestion: trusts
...other offered him more money because he trust him so much and he know that his friend...
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Line 5, column 590, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...ney because he trust him so much and he know that his friend is very commetted. So, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 118.0 43.0788530466 274% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2357.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 541.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35674676525 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3302933469 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417744916821 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8591109345 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1785714286 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3214285714 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146930333208 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525185162623 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485008891937 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111062473126 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730562652969 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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