Being sociable plays a major role in a person's life. People need friends in order to make their lives social and enjoyable. Friendship has such a crucial effect on life that living without friend would not be possible. Although people have consensus on the very essential role of friendship in different aspect of life, especially happiness, there has been controversy among them whether it is more important to have the ability to keep friendship with a small group of people over a long period of time in order to pursue happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
To begin with, it should be mentioned that the ability of making new friends proves that a person have high quality of sociable characteristic. This social being brings a beneficial feature with itself and it is the fact that one with such an ability is able to spend more time with his friends and provide himself with happiness, in exchange. For instance, when a person increase his range of friends in number, it is crystal clear that he can attend more birthday party to celebrate and be happy. In this manner, happiness can be easily reached by extending friendship.
The second point is that if a person makes many new friends easily, it will be possible for him to experience many new activities with which his friends enjoy. Consequently, it would be even more interesting if that person has not experienced that activities before. For example, suppose that Sara is afraid of swimming alone. Recently, she has started to become familiar with James, who loves and enjoys swimming. Because of this friendship, Sarah has started swimming and now she feels happy. According to this sample, it is obvious how making new friends can lead to happiness.
Finally, friends help each other with their problems and devote their time an energy to solve each other's trouble. Based on this statement, making new friends means not only more people for getting help from them, but also more probable the problem to be solved. Thus, when the problem is solved, both the person who had the problem and his friends who helped him with solving that issue would feel happy.
In conclusion, I believe that making many new friends is more important for happiness than the ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time, since the former is more advantageous than the latter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
Being sociable plays a major role in a persons life. People need friends in order to m...
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Line 1, column 490, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ith a small group of people over a long period of time in order to pursue happiness than the a...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...he ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time, sinc...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...th a small number of people over a long period of time, since the former is more advantageous ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85784313725 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49279527005 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495098039216 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3901128436 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.111111111 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416927307401 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129551418442 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13837465313 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287720213609 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149584228931 0.0645574589148 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.