Nowadays, life has become more complex in comparison to the past and every member of a society is busy with myriad time consuming tasks. Although people have a consensus on the fact that modern life has become extremely complex, there is a controversy among them whether it is essential particularly necessary for youngsters to obtain the ability to plan and organize well as a neat solution for this issue.
To begin with, it should be mentioned that modern technology has become an absolutely unavoidable constituent of life and in exchange, it has caused the life to be transformed to a more complicated one. As a result, this complication is manifested in driving young people to distraction, especially from their main duties. For instance, in subway stations and bus stop or even at work, youngsters are observable being busy with their social network accounts such as Telegram and Instagram. Consequently, they will be unaware of their main task and time. Thus, they need to be able to plan and organize well in order to solve this issue.
The second point is medical advancements and health services improvement which have led modern life to be faced with tremendous rate of population growth. Accordingly, Population growth has caused cities and public transportation to be crowded along with streets to be full of cars and experiencing traffic jam. Due to these issues, many young people who want to use public transportation system or their own cars in order to go to their universities or work places inevitably will spend considerable amount of time on reaching their destination. This simply emphasizes on the importance of the ability to plan, for time is the most precious treasure of a person and it should be spent as wise as possible.
Finally, modern life has been filled with rivalry and competition even from the very first stage which is mainly about studying and it becomes more drastic as life continues. Every actions in the future should be planned and organized in advanced very carefully as a response to this trend. As the famous quote says "early bird catches the worm", in order to become successful in such a complex life, one should always devise plan for each decision, perfectly. Therefore, possessing the ability to plan and organize is absolutely essential for living this modern life.
In conclusion, I definitely agree with the fact that since modern life is very complex because of phenomena such as advanced technology, population growth, and rivalry characteristics of it people, particularly youngster needs to be able to plan and organize, well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 529, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
...ing the ability to plan and organize is absolutely essential for living this modern life. In conclu...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...dern life. In conclusion, I definitely agree with the fact that since modern life is very complex becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08644859813 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90384656543 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521028037383 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8616007707 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0625 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266322393688 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093084692232 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641380904959 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169751562244 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051947982143 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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