Friendship is a very important part of our lives. It is often defins the people with whom we are able to share our problems and be confident. Some people think that the ability to make new friends easily is more important for happiness than the ability to maintain friendship with a small number of people over a long periond of time; others disagree. In my view, ability to make new friends easily is more important for happiness for two important reasons.
The main reason is that it will be easier to you to move to another city or country and start new life. People who are able to find a new friend easily are more likely to integrate into the new society. This assimilation will provide for you more opportunities in the new place. For example, my father was born in Vladivostok, it is near Siberia. This region was undeveloped and didn't provide good condition of life. As a result, many people wanted to left their houses. Many people stayed there because they didn't know how to make new friends outside their region. But my father could he has good communication skills. And he moved to Ukraine. Here he started up the business and family. As you can see, people who are able to find easily new friend are able to get more benefits.
Another reason is that you will meet more interesting person. Many people who travel communicate with other people, they share their experience with each other. Without this skill, they won't be able to share the information. For instance, last year when I traveled to the Netherlands I met Vladslaw. He had been traveling around the world for two years. I'm very happy that I was able to become a friend with him, because he explained to me many different ways to save money during a trip. His advices were really helpful with them I'm able to save money and travel more. As you can, without this skill I wouldn't get these tips.
In sum, though some may think that the ability to maintain a friendship with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important, but I think that the ability to make new friends easily is more important for happiness. It not only will be easier for you to start a new life in a different place but also you will be able to find more interesting people
In sum, though some may think that the ability to maintain a friendship with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important, I think that the ability to make new friends easily is more important for happiness. It not only will be easier for you to start a new life in a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46137339056 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38841201717 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394849785408 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.3341167536 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9615384615 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434597130453 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116668244815 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142330172565 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326432309231 0.150856017488 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141691417943 0.0645574589148 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.