Friendships are really important in one's life. Some argue that maintaining friendships with a small number of people for a long time gives more happiness. While others argue that making friends more easily is much better. In my opinion, I strongly believe that ability to make many friends is good because one can be happy in any situation.
First, if a person has the ability to make more friends he can gain more knowledge from others and can improve their communication skills. For instance, when I was studying engineering in the JNTU university in India, I found different students from different places like China and Africa and made a friendship with them. As a result, I learned a lot of things from them about their culture, tradition, and customs. And I also learned their languages which enhanced my ability to speak different languages.
Second, a person will not feel lonely in any circumstance if he can speak to the other people at any time. For example, when I was studying in high school, I have a friend who speaks only to old friends. For instance, once in her class, all of her friends were absent, and she really felt lonely as she does not have the ability to make new friends. Consequently, one should make new friends, which helps them to be happier in any situation.
In conclusion, I believe that making new friends makes happier and which is also helpful to increase their knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Friendships are really important in ones life. Some argue that maintaining frien...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...argue that maintaining friendships with a small number of people for a long time gives more happi...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e for a long time gives more happiness. While others argue that making friends more e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...neering in the JNTU university in India, I found different students from differen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y ability to speak different languages. Second, a person will not feel lonely in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, really, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 245.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79591836735 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62508324772 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5869444909 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3846153846 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 5.45110844103 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267924418505 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961438924025 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781379618509 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167716186113 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972170293963 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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