There are different views on friendship. Some may think that it is better to maintain friendships with a fewer people for a long time gives more happiness. Others may disagree. They prefer to make more friends. In my opinion, the ability to make many new friends is better.
First, making many new friends is an advantage because one can learn how to interact with others. Doubtlessly, such interactions with other people will help you to enhance the ability to think and to learn new things. For instance, two years ago, during my university time at the JNTU university in India, there are different students from different places like China and Africa. On one day, I spoke to one of them and, we became friends. My friend Ali was able to tell me about their traditions, culture, and customs. As a result, I learned a lot of things from him. This helped me to understand their mindset. Therefore, making new friends helps to broaden your mind and to understand different people.
Second, making new friends will help you not to feel lonely in any circumstances. It is evident that, if you cannot speak to the other people at any time you will be bored. For example, in the past when I was studying in high school, I have a friend who speaks only to old friends. Once in class, all of her friends were absent, then she was unable to speak with other people. She really felt lonely as she does not have the ability to make new friends. Furthermore, she was unable to enhance her skills to learn new languages. Consequently, one should make new friends, which helps them to be happier in any situation.
In conclusion, I believe that making new friends helps to be happy and to increase knowledge. That is why one should make new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...different views on friendship. Some may think that it is better to maintain friendshi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd and to understand different people. Second, making new friends will help you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, really, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65048543689 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5322502741 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527508090615 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.483053433 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3181818182 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0454545455 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263515014753 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080512897329 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068211956235 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185325779687 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067491038061 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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