By and large, the significance of happiness is little debate in today's society. This is due to the fact that all the people have some problems during their hectic life and they should have a good ability to be happy. On should keep in mind, this is not surprising to notice that like all prominent subjects, its aspects are subject to discussion and analysis. For instance, what is the better manner to have friends when it comes to the impact of it in happiness is controversial. A question that is sometimes raised in this regard is that "is it the more important effect on happiness when you have an ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time?"
I personally repudiate this statement as it seems not enough logical. In what follows I will attempt to clarify the reason for my decision more.
On imperative reason coming to mind at first is that in any situation, this ability has no effect. It's conspicuous that when people fall in some situations that can't continue perfectly in this long period friendships, it can hurt them. Perhaps, a more specific and firsthand experience can shed more light on the matter. Let me take back you to a few years ago when my friend wants to study in another country. Actually, she doesn't have the ability to make new friends easily and when she went in Italy, she faced with very problems since not only missed she all of her friends because of the long-distance problem but also she couldn't find the new friend.
Another interesting point which deserves some words here is that if people can make new friends easily, they can be happier since they do not depend on persons. I mean they are happy whether they be with a new person or not since they can make new friends easily. I think that in this situation, people consider themselves to the first degree of their life and it can help them to be more self-confident. For the purpose of illustration, a rather recent yet substantially important social study conducted at the University of Tehran can be pointed out. The researchers found out that the abler to make new friends that people have, the more self-confident can create in themselves.
To wrap it all up, all the aforementioned or maybe shortsighted ideas lead us to the conclusion that the ability to make new friends is obligatory in order to ensure happiness since it helps to people, have more adaptation in the new situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 646, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...an ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time?&apos...
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Line 1, column 683, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...th a small number of people over a long period of time?' I personally repudiate this sta...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...hen people fall in some situations that cant continue perfectly in this long period ...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...study in another country. Actually, she doesnt have the ability to make new friends ea...
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Line 3, column 628, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... the long-distance problem but also she couldnt find the new friend. Another interest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, so, for instance, i mean, i think, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70327102804 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70704266005 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507009345794 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9823844325 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.411764706 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1764705882 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309675115846 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910100918546 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744773642961 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161201110995 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050516370761 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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