It goes without saying that in recent decades univerties has played a pivotal role in every individual's life, thus people show more interests in academic degree (academic study). In this regard, there is a long standing discussion among academics about which courses should university students take as
required one. history coursewhether university students in all fields of studies should take history as a required course
It goes without saying that learning about history palys a pivotal role in every individual's life. In this regard, there is a long standing discussion among academics about how history courses should be regarded in universities. some people are inclined towards the fact that students in all fields of study must take history courses as a requierd sourse, whereas others hold exactly the opposite point and believe that history courses must be an elective course and only students who are interested should take it. as far as I'm concerend, the second viewpoint is more covincing. In the folloing paragraphs I will delve into the most impoprtant reasons.
First and foremost, some students are not good in memorizing sentences and words. for instance, most of the student who chose to study math in university was probably good at learning and comprehending concepts and had a better performance in courses that needs an undrestanding rather than memorizing. as a personal example, when I was a highschool student, I always hated courses which needed to be memorized, such as history or geography and although I was fascinated learning about the hiostory of my country, I was annoyed being forced to memorize all those historical incidents or events. Had I had a choice in choosing my favorite course in school, I would have never take history as an elective one.
Another significantly important reason is that taking a favorite course instead of a forced one will not only be beneficial for their future career, but also motivate them to boraden their knowkedge. in this way, students get a chance to select a course they are interested in, yet some of them might choose history as their favorite one. to shed light on this issue, as a chemistry student I had this oppotrunity to take genetics as a selective course. the concepts I learned in this class inspired me to do a research project in bioorganic field which I found myself so interested in that it made me decide to pursue my future study in this field.
To make a long story short, universiry student should be able to choose their favorite elective course between variety of availible ones, since forcing them to take history might have a negative impact on them. on the other hand, it would pave the way for them to experience what is more appealing for them.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ties has played a pivotal role in every individuals life, thus people show more interests i...
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...urses should university students take as required one. history coursewhether univ...
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Suggestion: History
...rsity students take as required one. history coursewhether university students in al...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
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...t history palys a pivotal role in every individuals life. In this regard, there is a long s...
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...ses should be regarded in universities. some people are inclined towards the fact th...
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...story courses must be an elective course and only students who are interested sho...
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...y student I had this oppotrunity to take genetics as a selective course. the conc...
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...y might have a negative impact on them. on the other hand, it would pave the way f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, whereas, for instance, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2291.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96963123644 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7128482532 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492407809111 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7902831632 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.764705882 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1176470588 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333944608797 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10827021524 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894988819513 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211014946765 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114624169886 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ties has played a pivotal role in every individuals life, thus people show more interests i...
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Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urses should university students take as required one. history coursewhether univ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: History
...rsity students take as required one. history coursewhether university students in al...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...t history palys a pivotal role in every individuals life. In this regard, there is a long s...
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Suggestion: Some
...ses should be regarded in universities. some people are inclined towards the fact th...
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...story courses must be an elective course and only students who are interested sho...
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Suggestion: I'm
...re interested should take it. as far as Im concerend, the second viewpoint is more...
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...good in memorizing sentences and words. for instance, most of the student who chose...
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...n undrestanding rather than memorizing. as a personal example, when I was a highsc...
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Suggestion: taken
...te course in school, I would have never take history as an elective one. Another si...
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...tivate them to boraden their knowkedge. in this way, students get a chance to sele...
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Suggestion: To
...t choose history as their favorite one. to shed light on this issue, as a chemistr...
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...y student I had this oppotrunity to take genetics as a selective course. the conc...
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...o take genetics as a selective course. the concepts I learned in this class inspir...
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...y might have a negative impact on them. on the other hand, it would pave the way f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, whereas, for instance, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2291.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96963123644 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7128482532 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492407809111 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7902831632 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.764705882 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1176470588 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333944608797 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10827021524 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894988819513 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211014946765 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114624169886 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.