Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that public transportation provides welfare to people and has several advantages to improve the people life. Contrary to this popular belief there are still those who argue that Internet revolt science and technology thus it has priority to public transportation for investment and extension. However, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that the government should spend money to improve public transportation.
First and foremost, the Earth is near to an environmental disaster. In twenty- century was align with an increase in the number of automobiles and other motor vehicles that every day put more and more harmful gasses to air. Now, the greenhouse gasses is a very serious threatened for most of the natural habitats. The motor vehicles not only release a lot of greenhouse gasses into the atmosphere but also they produce much amount of harmful pollution that directly related to disease like lung cancer, heart illness and some psychological problems like stress and depression. Therefore, expanding pure public transportation is a vital need for our current world.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that transportation has a more comprehensive application to all member of society than Internet access. It is true that approximately most people use from the Internet on their daily works but there are still some people that the Internet has not a very important role in their life. For example, factory labors are not highly engaged in use from electronic devices and also the Internet. However, cheap public transportation has a more meaningful role in their life, in order to reduce some of their problems.
Finally, yet importantly, improving physical health by forcing people to more walking and physical activity. The better access to public transportation encourage people to reduce driving personal cars and it provides the opportunity for more physical movement and decline risk of illness caused by a lack in physical activities, like high blood pressure, fat and diabetes.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that it is more important for the government to spend money to improve public transportation than Internet access. Because of it's crucial environmental and health role in human societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'aligned'.
Suggestion: aligned
...mental disaster. In twenty- century was align with an increase in the number of autom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, it is true, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34510869565 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97119992683 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0799220364 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.9375 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267136003531 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889690772413 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100165289544 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161109645524 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884068738775 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.