Government has important role in policy making and public benefit. In some countries the government believes and prioritis their action toward green energy and future goal but some think more about the present issues and improving the public welfare. I beleive it is more important for government to provide the solusion for present issues first then take care of future goals. In my opinion improving public transport is much more important for governments than improving internet access. I will elaborate my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, although the improvement in internet access improves the access in remote area and would benefit people who live there, public transportation and not having good public transport would affect everyday life of people. Lots of citizens who are using public transport are suffering from lack of or defeciency of public transport system. They should spend lots of time waiting for a vacant bus or subway to be able to board and go to work or do their arrands. This will waste their time and energy which could be used in a more productive way. If the government prioratizes improvement in transportation system this will affect and improve citizens life.
Also, if people can use public transport they less likely use their own car and this improves the air polussion. In big cities air pullussion always cause serious health issues for people and any measures to reduce that would benefit the citizen. For instance, statistics shows that air poluusion is responsible of hospital admissions in 50 percent of cases. improving the public transport can encourage people to use it more which reduces the use of their own car and improvement in poluusion.
Lastly, trafic is one of the issues of the big cities that waist time and energy. By improvement in public transport and its reasonable cost more people use it and traffic would be solved if more people do not use their own car for commute.
In conclusion, although improvement in internet access has great benefit for governments, public transportation system improvement would solve the pullusion, trafic and improves quality of life of citizens
- Venu Mars Moon Earth pressure space spacecraft other planets like Venus 15 kilometer 73
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- TPO 48 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 66
- TPO 43 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Improving
...ital admissions in 50 percent of cases. improving the public transport can encourage peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1396011396 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71337870676 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478632478632 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3552035622 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.117647059 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385775087636 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143865453681 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120126667743 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24565610329 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803266471031 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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