TPO11
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems.
Today with the galloping rate of science and technology such as computers and internet, we can get various and valuable information and news from different countries easily. Internet as an accessible technology that almost all people can use, has been creating many wonderful and unprecedented changes in our lives. Although some people say that the internet provides so much unnecessary information and it will create some problems such as wasting time and electronic crimes, no one can deny and turn a blind eye to the significance and numerous effects of the internet in thriving and blooming societies. I deeply believe that the internet can provide us a lot of valuable information from all over the world. In the following paragraph, I will explain my reasons.
First and foremost, the internet helps us access to many comprehensive knowledge and information resources such as electronic books and articles which are published in all over the world. I would like to support this by giving an example of students who can read different websites, online encyclopedias, and electronic librarians in order to collect various and valuable information about their thesis and assignments. They can see different professors' profile and their research interests and download the related articles and books. Approximately 15 years ago the students had to go to library and look for their books and articles which they needed and this was very difficult and boring for them; however, today they can sit in their rooms and type their topics about variety of subjects in search engines such as Google and Yahoo and collect the best data and information easily.
Second, with the advent and advancement of different social networks and new applications such as Facebook, telegram, and Skype, the universe had been transformed to a small village that people around the world can see each other and share their personal pictures, videos, and various information and data immediately and easily as well as they can speak together about their knowledge and different experiences. This is especially valuable for people who work in different cities or even countries and should send each other much information. Therefore, the internet makes our life more convenient than past. Not only can people see each other from a long distance, but also they can share their data easily less than a minute.
To put everything in a nutshell and broad lookover the main points and discussions reveal the fact that the internet as the most scientific achievement of the 20th century has been developing our world so much so that we can send and receive the data and information less than two or three minutes. In addition, we have access to various and comprehensive online information resources. Therefore, it is incontrovertibly axiomatic that the internet play crucial role in people's life.
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- TPO2Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Agree or disagree? 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Educating children is more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone online games and social networking websites Use specific reasons and examples to su 95
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 44.0 13.8261648746 318% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2408.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17849462366 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8446906689 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505376344086 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.25537681 48.9658058833 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.5 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0625 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281298554894 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975633536383 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685274699893 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179703657468 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911440025366 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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