TPO12-Q2
no i am disagree with this statement that says it is better to have broad knowledge of many academics subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. i think, being specialize in one specific subject is better because in that way we can do a specific work in best form of that. society need to very kind of work and persons that been specialist in their work. some jobs can not perform just by a little knowledge in their context. also some jobs need to hard work by body while some jobs are very motionless and do not need hard body work. so some knowledge in many subjects is good but it is not sufficient. in my mind some work with similar subjects and context and motion can complete each other so for doing those jobs in best form, knowing both of those is good and useful. any person have talent or ability in specific subject so that person can do that work related to his or her talent in best way and with great result and cosequence. in other hand some people with hard work are busy enough that do not have more time for doing other job.
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- integrated writing toefl, TPO 25 40
- Essay topics: TPO-25- Integrated Writing Task 40
- In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line. The vessel was about 2,200 years old. Each clay jar contained a copper cylinder surrounding an iron rod. The 3
- Ethanol fuel, made from plants such as corn and sugar cane, has been advocated by some people as an alternative to gasoline in the United States. However, many critics argue that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline for several reasons.First, th 66
- The sea otter is a small mammal that lives in waters along the western coast of North America from California to Alaska.When some sea otter populations off the Alaskan coast started rapidly declining a few years ago, it caused much concern because sea ott 40
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ons that been specialist in their work. some jobs can not perform just by a little k...
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...ionless and do not need hard body work. so some knowledge in many subjects is good...
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...jects is good but it is not sufficient. in my mind some work with similar subjects...
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...owing both of those is good and useful. any person have talent or ability in specif...
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... that work related to his or her talent in best way and with great result and cosequenc...
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...not have more time for doing other job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31155778894 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16586995263 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502512562814 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 618.680645161 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3138176505 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 86.8835125448 30% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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