There is no shortage of debate about whether always telling the truth is most essentiat.Some people fav or of telling truth because they belive relationships depends on reliability.In my opinion,people may tell lie in some situations.I feel this way for two main reason, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, we should check every word and sentences that we say because sometimes we can not expect its consequences. Therefore, to not be regret we must be tight-lipped. But in some case we know that if we say true it would be vital,so we decided to hire our thining. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was at university my brother was studying at highscholl. He was struggling with scince class and to be graduated he had to pass exam with high point. He studied throughout six weeks but was unluck therefore he failed. However he was afraid of learning my father his situation because he will punished him to study just last six weeks. My brother explained me all details of his situation and wanted to be sure I will not say something to my father. Because he had another opportunity pass the exam. It was make-up exam that gives student a second way to be succees. I kept his promise and said my parents that he passed the exam there is no problem about that. Then my brother achieved his mission in his second chance and graduated from highscholl. It obviously demonstrates that if we predict expect consequences we can lie. To sum up, to keep a relatinship depend on reliablity each other we sometimes say lie to another individuals.
Secondly, sometimes we do not want to answer some kind of question because we dont favor of share our belief or kept it hidden. Everyone experienced this unbearable situation and maybe they have been keeping their secret that hidden in answer for a long time. Basic purpose of this behavior is dont want to hurt someone. For example when I was in university my friend was struggling with macro economic class which is most important and basic course of our department. He asked me whether am I well in this class. I said I am bad and I do dont know how can I overcome. This was not true because I learned all details of macro economics, especially, about relationship between investments and interest rates which would be most important part of our exam. Because I had another exams at same week and I did not want to help him but I was afraid of hurting him. For this reason I strongly believe that sometimes best way to maintain our relationship with our friends, parents, teachers do not say truth is best way.
In conclusion, I severely think that ''white lies'' might be crucial to continue our relationship over strong basic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 88.0 43.0788530466 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6625 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7710526229 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504166666667 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3558819697 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0769230769 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0857150510203 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205287581038 0.076458572812 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434648101834 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760184321256 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064378918798 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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