TPO28-Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past
Over the past few decade, the issue of whether pranets are more participate in their childrens's edcucation than previous time has received a great deal of attention from people and society. Although some may argue that ithese dacades parents are more busy than past since they cannot involve in their children's education, I as well as many others believe that today our parent are more educated than their parents and they are more sensitive to their children's education than their father and mothers. This following ecplanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First an foremost, a paramount reason why today parents get more involve in their children's training is that they are more aware than the parents in the pasts. In this competitionary world, finding a suitable occupation has become more arduous than the past and parents are familiar with this issue. In these decades, a large number of high-level jobs are depend on the high education and due to this reasons parents are worried about their offsprings' training. Take the medical field as an example, the number of the demand on this major has been grew over the past decades due to the fact that this major can bring plenty of money to the doctors. As a result, parents affort more than the past to help their children to reach such these this positions by helping them in their education.
A further reason for this view is that, our grand parents were not educated on those time. At the past, people virtually were not well-educated and they had not went to school as well. our pranets, in contrast, are more educated and more aware about the education systems;thus, they can assist their children in their lessons. Since they have experienced schools and colleges, they can be helpful for their children in their lessons' problems. For instance, my mother is a psychologist and when i was a child, she could always help me to understand my lessons and control my stress in exams duration.
Finalyy, it is ocassionally said that parents are more sensitive about their children than previous decades. On our grand parents time, children did not have a high place in family and parents did not attention to them so much; consequently, the children's education was not a significant issue for them. However, today parents respects children more than before and pay attention to their problems either in their education or they life.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned above, I can draw a conclusion that these days parents are more involved in their offsprings education' issues chiefly due to raising the awareness of the parents and be more educated than the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun decade seems to be countable; consider using: 'few decades'.
Suggestion: few decades
Over the past few decade, the issue of whether pranets are more ...
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Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...laborate on this perspective. First an foremost, a paramount reason why today ...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...liar with this issue. In these decades, a large number of high-level jobs are depend on the high ...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
..., a large number of high-level jobs are depend on the high education and due to this r...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...depend on the high education and due to this reasons parents are worried about their...
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Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...er of the demand on this major has been grew over the past decades due to the fact t...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...nd they had not went to school as well. our pranets, in contrast, are more educated...
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Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e, my mother is a psychologist and when i was a child, she could always help me t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in brief, in contrast, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98876404494 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61018370181 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469662921348 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4156821229 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.588235294 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1764705882 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.563228948425 0.236089414692 239% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212439454838 0.076458572812 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152153994618 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.382828457808 0.150856017488 254% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772050072083 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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