TPO29 -To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors
universities are much important part of our society. Every innovation besides education and growing new idea come from universities and other educational centers. university teachers and professors are one of the most important pillars of this institution who they should have a good life condition to their best. Some people may think university teachers don't have important job and they don't deserve high salary, while others such as me believe that they should the highest salary range. There are several reasons to deliberately explain why I lean to this side.
First of all, the higher salary for university teachers will bring them a better financial situation. In this situation, they devote their time to jobs. teachers have good opportunity to work with most talented young people and they should work hard to can tutor them. they should be up to date and learn about many things. These hard work needs calm mind to pay attention to a lot of factors. they need a good salary to make a good financial situation. it makes a flourishing environment for them to invent new idea which may take a step more to make a better life in earth. one of my teachers said after getting a good raise, she could hire a nanny for her baby. after that she could stay two hours more in the library and help students to run their research projects. I think they deserve a good high salary.
Secondly, with a good salary, they won't be worry about a lot of daily life chores. they will spend their most time with their students help them to study well. The students are next managers and promoter of the world. If they get the best education, we can hope to have a better condition in our societies. other than this they can manage their research projects better and finish them sooner. my brother works in a project that they work on a new garbage recycling system. he believes that each day that this new system will be launched it can save a lot of resources and it is a big help to save our planet. he was very thankful of his teachers how they stayed until midnight to finish that project.
In conclusion, university teachers work in the edge of science and technology which can help a lot of human life. they should earn enough money to manage their life and devote their time in research and investigation. I hope that politicians provide the rules to facilitate this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68660287081 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46307057354 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495215311005 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0295028568 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3461538462 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03846153846 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15296568198 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423112777882 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486320886706 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104627401421 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574813512913 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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