Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that teachers have a very important role in shaping children's' future life, so today teachers are highly regarded by all people in society. Contrary, to this popular belief there are still those who argue that today often children make joke their teachers and parents also do not appreciate their position like it was in the past. However, I to a great extent, disagree with this idea that teachers were more valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
First and foremost, today education has priority to any other subjects in social management in all of the countries. Most governments allocate remarkable of public budget for maintaining and improving education. Because they realize that development and success of each nation are not possible without a good educational principle. The highly intelligent and keen mind person select as the future teachers. Teachers not only should pass a lot of reviewing process to prove their expertise in this field, but also they should be people with a nice personality, moral beliefs and great communication skills. Therefore, these brilliant people extremely valued by society, because they are the best people that future of our children and the progress of society is dependent on them.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that in the past people mainly appreciated based on their caste rather than an appropriate character or their scientific knowledge. People in the past had accepted the hierarchy thoughts that had legalized by ruler caste. In addition, most of the high-rank people were involved in governments administrative position, not education. Teachers were mainly from middle-class people and with minimum educational background. In contrast with their important role do not get enough attention because of their caste.
Finally, yet importantly, it is true that teachers were a well-known person in their surrounding hometown because there were a few numbers of educated people in their area. Nonetheless, they were not always regarded by common people, because education did not know as a necessary issue for most people. At this time the usual jobs do not require educational background and were typically physical work. Thus, in the large-scale parents not only do not encourage their children to study, but also they refused importance of teachers role and avoid their children study.
On the basis of reasons that was mentioned above, I am convinced that today teachers are more regarded by people than they were in the past. Because of the general hierarchy beliefs and people awareness about the importance of education in human living.
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- TPO 45-integrated 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... other subjects in social management in all of the countries. Most governments allocate re...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peopled'?
Suggestion: peopled
... in this field, but also they should be people with a nice personality, moral beliefs ...
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Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...with minimum educational background. In contrast with their important role do not get en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in contrast, it is true, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2266.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29439252336 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76397425328 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511682242991 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.532138824 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230271059945 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790103659427 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102105974859 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152140697697 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688518966318 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.