TPO45-Independent
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that in today's progressive world we live in, correct decision making plays a significant role in all aspects of people's lives. Most of the people are dealing with distinctive issues during a day. Depend on the importance of our problems, decision-making process might be different. Some believe that in the past, young persons were so dependent on their parents to make decisions for them. However, others think that in these days, young people do not rely on their parent for deciding about their issues in the life. I personally concur with the later group's idea. In what follows, my opinions would be delineated.
To begin with, by advances in technology allow youths to facilitate the process of decision-making. It is clearly evident that people in these days can obtain much profound information by searching on the internet. Most of the young people communicate with others with their smartphone, Tablet as well as laptops. Therefore, they would make more friends that might help them for selecting suitable choices. By way of illustration, consider a young one trying to attend a university. To find out what majors and universities are better for him, he can search on the internet and get much data about various fields and colleges. Besides that, their experienced friends who had a similar issue are able to help them to choose the best options which are more compatible with their interests. As in turns out; young individuals today manage to reach decisions independently.
The second reason in rooted in the fact that in this era, young people spend much time far from their parents in comparison to the past. They might go to other cities for seeking an appropriate job. In some cases, they maybe study at a college which is located in another country. It is seen that if young individuals were far from their family, they would take more responsibilities for making a decision in their personal lives. If we consider this point meticulously, it will be found out in the past persons used to live together. They often lived with their grandmothers and grandfathers. Obviously, due to the fact that they almost spent time with their family, they did not have experience of independent making decisions. Consequently, they try to consider suggestions not only from their parents but also from their grandparents. ُThus, nowadays youth have more ability to decide what the best ways in their own lives are better.
In conclusion, based on aforementioned grounds, in the modern society, young persons have more opportunity to make a decision independently owing to the progress of new technology and living lonely in long distances. It would increase their capacity for making a right decision and considering all aspect of their issues accurately.
- Which is more important in one's career life? The working knowledge and skills or the ability to adapt to new conditions. 80
- int 41 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 85
- TPO 47-integrated 73
- TPO27-independent 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to attend a university. To find out what majors and universities are better for h...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
..., he can search on the internet and get much data about various fields and colleges....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld take more responsibilities for making a decision in their personal lives. If w...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'as well as', 'in some cases', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212765957447 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.15087040619 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0928433268859 0.0866891130778 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0560928433269 0.046263068375 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.073500967118 0.0685040099705 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15087040619 0.118717715034 127% => OK
Participles: 0.036750483559 0.0351676179071 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84163776707 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0309477756286 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00580270793037 0.00188951952338 307% => OK
Determiners: 0.0793036750484 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212765957447 0.0209618222197 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0135396518375 0.0139019557991 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2823.0 2387.08602151 118% => OK
No of words: 467.0 408.028673835 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04496788009 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329764453961 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233404710921 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169164882227 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115631691649 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84163776707 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539614561028 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 64.2615844521 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9615384615 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5011983939 48.84282405 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.576923077 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9615384615 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 41.3020095536 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.4275862069 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0082177794831 0.300154397459 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0663107202407 0.103427244359 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0543839636186 0.0752933317313 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.416105081284 0.497263757937 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127273231335 0.151897553556 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00327225571603 0.114077575197 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0163612785802 0.0781384742642 21% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.394061689496 0.336927656856 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0250397747142 0.067059652881 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00489668697318 0.210909579961 2% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0084813106263 0.0618886996521 14% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.91756272401 285% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 13.0 2.75985663082 471% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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