Nowadays, specially in the modern era, people are experiencing more high level of anxiety due to forced pressure of issues regariding modern style of living. The debate on how one should release his/her stress has been garnering a wide range of views. Some people posit that the best way to decrease stress is to spend time alone. On the other hand, some others take the opposite side and disagree. I am on boared with the latter group's idea and I think it will be more efficient to spend time with one another. In the following paragraghs, I will elaborate cogently on the main reasons.
To begin with, The first exquisite point which should be considered here is that spending time with your precious people not only gives you the chance to enjoy your time but also it will help you to forget about your problems. By sharing your time with for instance your friend, they will provide you memorable moments that aids you to forget about your difficulties.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is that, if you let people to know about your problems by spending time with them, they can help you by giving helpful pieces of advice. If you insist on not acommodating with other people, you cannot find useable ways inorder to get rid of your stress.
Eventually, spending time alone not only won't assist you to reduce your stress, but also in this way, your mind keep thinking of your difficulties you have. For example, last month I had high level of stress because of my university program and I by thinking alone, I couldn't find a solution to get relaxed. After discussing with one of my friends, she explained me the situation and by her advice, I got a lot more relaxed.
To wrap up, Taking all aforementioned reasons, it could be authentically concluded that from my vantage point, spending time with other people is a better way to relax and reduce stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...sity program and I by thinking alone, I couldnt find a solution to get relaxed. After d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73716012085 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50012002158 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558912386707 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.566005381 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151006780044 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571628577681 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427577071081 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911981775777 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370992554506 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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