Travelling the world can be very insightful and educational. Do you prefer to travel by yourself or with other companies?why?use specific examples and reasons to explain your opinion?
Gallivanting around the world is a fascinating experience for many people irrespective of their ages. They may travel alone or with other companions.I believe that voyaging alone is better than going with others due to the fact that it’s more affordable, can discover myself and plan better.
To begin with, travelling individually will save a lot of money. Generally, if group trip is conducted a greater amount is needed for the trip. This will be in less enjoyable due to the huge expenses and several destinations will be spared. On the contrary, if traveled alone a lot of adventures can be planned. For instance, when I traveled alone I required only twenty dollars to explore San Francisco whereas when i organised a whole family trip it costs a lot more which included stay, food, and other leisure activities. Therefore, I believe that travelling alone is cheaper and enjoyable.
Furthermore, if I travel alone I will be able to understand myself and my needs. When I face the difficulties and challenges involved in a trip I will find a way to face them. I can analyse the ways I would resolve the issues and take care. Besides, it will add a new experience to my life and be able to differentiate my weakness and strengths. This will boost my confidence. For example, if I am globetrotting alone I am given a chance to explore what i can pursue and what are my likes and dislikes. Here, I am given the opportunity to decide among the various options to choose and explore them. Presumably, when an individual is allowed to follow his decisions he can shape his personality. Hence, I think journeys alone helps in shaping the overall nature of the person.
Finally, a good planning is needed for an excellent trip. In a group journey everyone has to follow the common schedule regarding the places to visit and timings. Often such trips will be in a hurry due to the time limitation. Likewise, if there are lot of places charted to visit on a single day then it will make us tired and less enjoyable. For example, a travel agency sponsored tour programs will not be so pleasurable in spite of travelling lot of places. However, If traveled alone the entire route can be prepared according to our preference and need not compromise any likes for others. It is due to this fact that I support that travelling alone is better.
To conclude, truly tour programs carried out alone is beneficial to one’s budget , develop confidence and have planned, fulfilling trips
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in spite of, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8023255814 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8345471307 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520930232558 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2955878478 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166139456717 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514663346053 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548647893065 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975489367397 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587097247225 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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