Truth is a essential for any relationship. some poeple believe that truth is the most important thing for any type of relationship, others have a different thought. In my opinion, telling the truth is one of the most important concern in individual life. Admittdy, some believe that some situstion in our life inforce us to hide the truth. To me I concur with the statement that truth is crucial role for successful of any part in the life. I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my piont of view in the subject.
In the begining, telling the truth is a moral issue. we should teach our kids to practise themselves to telling the truth in any sitaution because when they do the respect will be built between them and the others. In the other hand, if they do the opposit. this will ruin the relationship with the other. In the other word. Truth is the basic stone in building a stronge connection especially between family members.
Furthermore. when individual face anything wrong spesificly in the work he should corect it directly. for example, any one responsible to say the truth about any project or design that proposed in his work despite of who did that mistake,because if we not say any thing the wronge will continue and the work get anegative result.
Moreover, the truth is important to built a stronge relation between parents and their kids. When kids grow up in honest family which teach their kidhow the truth is important, they will gain their children trust. This is mainly because, kis imitate their parents in any behavior. When parents have any thought or habit, kids will get this adjective from their parents. that why telling truth help to build a stronge personality. in addition to strenght the relationship betwen parents and their kids. To sum up, The statement is as persuasive as it stands, this based onexposition that mentioned above. telling truth considerd as a moral thing. furthermore, truth is important to strenght the relationship between parents and their kids.
Truth is a essential for any relationship. some poeple believe that truth is the most important thing for any type of relationship, others have a different thought. In my opinion, telling the truth is one of the most important concern in individual life. Admittdy, some believe that some situstion in our life inforce us to hide the truth. To me I concur with the statement that truth is crucial role for successful of any part in the life. I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my piont of view in the subject.
In the begining, telling the truth is a moral issue. we should teach our kids to practise themselves to telling the truth in any sitaution because when they do the respect will be built between them and the others. In the other hand, if they do the opposit. this will ruin the relationship with the other. In the other word. Truth is the basic stone in building a stronge connection especially between family members.
Furthermore. when individual face anything wrong spesificly in the work he should corect it directly. for example, any one responsible to say the truth about any project or design that proposed in his work despite of who did that mistake,because if we not say any thing the wronge will continue and the work get anegative result.
Moreover, the truth is important to built a stronge relation between parents and their kids. When kids grow up in honest family which teach their kidhow the truth is important, they will gain their children trust. This is mainly because, kis imitate their parents in any behavior. When parents have any thought or habit, kids will get this adjective from their parents. that why telling truth help to build a stronge personality. in addition to strenght the relationship betwen parents and their kids. To sum up, The statement is as persuasive as it stands, this based onexposition that mentioned above. telling truth considerd as a moral thing. furthermore, truth is important to strenght the relationship between parents and their kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85755813953 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6862085298 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485465116279 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2504903433 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.652173913 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9565217391 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52173913043 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.535720558207 0.236089414692 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169657723349 0.076458572812 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184504586979 0.0737576698707 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330263798629 0.150856017488 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.250553051633 0.0645574589148 388% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.