Twentieth century is full of wonders. Community developed from all sides.Changes occurred on in way of thinking, way of living as well as different technology invented. Together these all took our lives on ninth cloud. But if I had to name a single major thing, I would say change in technology in the form of internet. Major scientific discovery happened in 20 th century, Internet was one of them.
At the start of this century we had computers. They were initially developed for mathematics, calculation and storage was possible. Someone thought that it would be great if could share the information via computers by using network. Network was named after spider web as, all computers were connected like web. Network was renamed as Internet. At the end of century many things were in the race of being biggest one and by taking over all of them Internet won first position.
Major reason behind this was data sharing through wire became possible. No special efforts required. Earlier books were used to share via libraries. Now it was possible to do this not only stored on computers bu also share it within fraction of seconds.
Last but not least, use of paper reduced considerably. We use wood as raw material for paper. Burden on deforestation reduced over time alternately it saved ecosystem indirectly.
After this holistic analysis we can clearly see that Internet was milestone. Beneficial effects of this discovery we are still facing in 21st century in the form of online marketing, elevated music industry. Hence in conclusion, there are lots of things to claim their position on first place. No other discovery can replace internet and will be remembered over generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Changes
...ers. Community developed from all sides.Changes occurred on in way of thinking, way of ...
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Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
... scientific discovery happened in 20 th century, Internet was one of them. At the st...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'being the biggest'.
Suggestion: being the biggest
...century many things were in the race of being biggest one and by taking over all of them Inte...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Now it was possible to do this not only stored on computers bu also share it wit...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
...possible to do this not only stored on computers bu also share it within fraction of sec...
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Line 6, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ernately it saved ecosystem indirectly. After this holistic analysis we can clearly s...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ine marketing, elevated music industry. Hence in conclusion, there are lots of things...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, still, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 281.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0462633452 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75512879308 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1266408177 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4545454545 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7727272727 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59090909091 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176480243915 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490341688888 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626558753698 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813298380563 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577260963402 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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