Everyone has their own definition of successful person is it prudent to say that lots of money is equal to successful person? Two different perspective emerges while meticulously evaluating this issue, one is in affirmative with aforementioned question while another disagrees cogently. Personally I have proclivity towards thought that money don’t make person successful because of two main reasons. First is satisfaction in life is more important than money and second reason is greedy for money
When we discuss first reason the first name comes in mind is of Dr Babasaheb Amate, a doctor, social worker and great person of that time. He was notorious doctor and worked for underdeveloped tribes of India. He reached their to improve their lives. He stayed their for whole life living with simplicity as well as he had successful life. While working he had no financial support and struggled whole life for earning money whereas as being godfather of tribe he improved their life by providing medical and educational facility. He lived peaceful and successful life. If you want to be remembered by people we we must think beyond box. Similar life was lived by Mother Teressa, a social worker,lived her life for people suffering from lepracy disease. Their lives were successful despite of having less money. Factor lacking money didn't make made any difference on their life.
Secondly, there is no doubt that from money we can buy good bed, better position and best business but we can not buy peaceful sleep, satisfactory job,love as well as care. Vijay Mallya, a businessman, have lots of money from different business and he did not paid bank loan and ran to foreign country. The question appears here that weather he was succeed in life? Answer is no because he is not having goof family life he married four times and everyone hates him. All will remember him as betrayer.
After this holistic analysis, it is evident that points are in favor of thought that cogently agreeing, money is not important to have successful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e reached their to improve their lives. He stayed their for whole life living with...
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Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... He lived peaceful and successful life. If you want to be remembered by people we ...
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Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: we
... If you want to be remembered by people we we must think beyond box. Similar life was...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , lived
...lived by Mother Teressa, a social worker,lived her life for people suffering from lepr...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...having less money. Factor lacking money didnt make made any difference on their life....
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , love
...not buy peaceful sleep, satisfactory job,love as well as care. Vijay Mallya, a busine...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'pay'
Suggestion: pay
... from different business and he did not paid bank loan and ran to foreign country. T...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...estion appears here that weather he was succeed in life? Answer is no because he is not...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ather he was succeed in life? Answer is no because he is not having goof family li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04719764012 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65409362704 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581120943953 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.3306354959 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0526315789 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992114101936 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311305729831 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236654502876 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604768093519 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271175056072 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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