In twenty year there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Agree/ disagree
It is argued that cars is mean of transport which will be used less in next twenty year. In my opinion, I believe that there are many reason for this matter can be come true.
Inducing increasing of public transports, people will use car less often. Thus, they will not need to own one car themselves. Public transports such as buses, taxes, trains are more and more develop about both ?? and safeness. For example, the administration of these mean of transport cares more about bus stops and train stops. These stop is nearer to people’s home and their office, shopping mall, as a result, people will choose public transport because of their safeness and their cheap fees. Besides that, buses and trains is also expanded to tourist resorts and urban areas, people can take these public transport to wherever they want.
Additionally, the development of Internet permit people can work without go out their home. Not only It will help people save time and decrease traffic jams but also help companies do not spend signature money on hiring office. For instance, task can be given through email, meeting can be hold by services such as skype. It means that people not be requested to go out their home and they will not need use car, of course.
Finally, we are living in a time which everything is gradually automatic. There are a lot of devices allow people buy everything with a click. What people must do is just open the website of shops, choose what they need and after that, staff of shops will take these goods to their door. It is also a fact that people more and more not want to go out their home, it is a negative results of industrial economy, but in this our issue today, it is a reason why car is used less.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...In my opinion, I believe that there are many reason for this matter can be come true. Indu...
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Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...are more and more develop about both ?? and safeness. For example, the administrati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, so, thus, for example, for instance, of course, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58064516129 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32218017294 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8830388067 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182158552313 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682261895637 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939282296514 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139696612218 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776388377196 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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