The public in general tend to believe that cars will lose their popularity in twenty years. In other words, a lot of people strongly believe that cars will be totally replaced by public transport in the next few years. However, some of the people have this idea that amount of cars in use will grow as cities and population grow. In my opinion, the amount of cars will decrease in the near future and I have three reason for this.
First and foremost, the public transport is becoming more and more popular. Nowadays, modern technologies allow to develop the highly organized structure with comfortable schedule and properly amount of transport which works simultaneously. Moreover, the government of some cities make tickets free for residents of the city. These facts make public transport very attractive for people and as a result, they refuse to use their own cars and more often start to use public transport because it faster and cheaper than a private car.
Second, it is important to note that transport such as bicycle also starts to play a vital role in people life. Bicycle rental have a huge popularity among residents and tourists in any kind of cities, because it’s easy, cheap and fast way to get to one place from another or just spend your free time. An important point is that bicycle doesn’t pollute air and make the environment clean, calm and very friendly for human which is so lacking in many cities.
Third, one cannot deny that cars pollute the environment. We cannot ignore the fact that the air pollution from cars is the serious problem in many cities. Nowadays, experts point out that air pollution is far away beyond from normal level even in small cities. The government of some big cities are restricting the cars’ movement in particular parts of the city because cars have harmful influence on residents. As the result of this actions, people are getting a clean air, calm environment without noisy cars and many places to walk and spend their time.
In conclusion, I would like to say that for the great majority of people car is necessary thing and it’s hard for them to reject it. I emphasize that modern global trends move away from the use of cars and they aim to create friendly environment for humans.
- The solution to most problems that societies confront is a higher level of political sophistication that results from more education. When people have the facts about the issues, they will be clearer thinkers and better citizens.Most people depend on broa 95
- The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- Appearances are deceitful To what extent do you agree or disagree with this 95
- Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 84
- Buying things on the Internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ansport in the next few years. However, some of the people have this idea that amount of ca...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'developing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: developing
...ar. Nowadays, modern technologies allow to develop the highly organized structure with com...
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Line 7, column 436, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nfluence on residents. As the result of this actions, people are getting a clean air...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, in conclusion, in general, in particular, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83846153846 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46939052123 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.299773819 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189167471944 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617075386482 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619393517016 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103918553621 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805099574563 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.