Youth people are not as healthy as 50 years ago. Do you agree or disagree with it?
There is no doubt that a healthy lifestyle plays an important role for everybody. Personally, I agree with the opinion, that teens and young adults are less healthy nowadays, than their ancestors were fifty years ago. In fact, I feel this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, the technological development is the first thing to blame. One should note here, that several decades ago people did many various types of activities, such as outdoor games or walking around a city. However, in our modern world citizens are more likely to spend their free time playing computer games or watching Youtube on a smartphone. In addition to this, many students spend plenty of time in studies and learning additional information for their careers. Consequently, people have a sedentary lifestyle which greatly affects their health and leads to serious physical and mental diseases.
Secondly, in my country the government provides less incentives for residents to do sports activities. For example, nearly forty years ago there were many different public facilities to do swimming, running and jogging, but now it is up to individuals to build and organise. As a result, students at schools and universities don’t have any good equipment as well as comfortable places such as gyms, because all new and modern places require additional payment for visiting. What is more, public marathons throughout a city are quite unpopular, so less and less participants join these events.
To draw the conclusion, because of the reasons above, I think that young inhabitants are less healthier than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun incentives is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun participants is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...a city are quite unpopular, so less and less participants join these events. To...
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Line 13, column 90, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less healthy'?
Suggestion: less healthy
...ove, I think that young inhabitants are less healthier than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25572519084 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.786168042 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664122137405 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4778037118 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1538461538 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136828366013 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426790777895 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639350738649 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725342610524 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610997548474 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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