Future is always unpredictable, for example, no one could imagine there will be mobile phones everyone is using everywhere. Yet, society evolved in the direction of a state where lack of mobile phones is odd for a person. Similarly, cars also would have the same effect on humans. Therefore, we can argue that there will be more cars than ever in the future, due to several reasons.
Firstly, technology is changing and improving day by day, and it eases people’s regular life. People have the instinct of preferring the easier path when they decide on something. In our case, for example, cars are inevitable to travel long distances. No one would walk 10 km everyday to get to their office, they prefer personal cars. Indeed, travelling between cities by car is more convenient and comfortable than using public transport. Although they are not as fast as planes, people love to have road trips with their friends. Furthermore, as time goes on new technologies are discovered to make these road trips easier and enjoyable. Maybe, someone will come up with an efficient way to fly the cars, or even cars that go under water. While these opportunities exist, in my humble opinion, the number of cars would go up.
Second, the population growth is another factor in this case. Everyday a new person is born, and the population is growing day by day. Consequently, society needs larger lands to live on. However, these lands -or cities- wouldn’t be close to each other, and people need to travel between these lands to live a life. For example, a person lives in a part of a big city but they work at the other edge of this city, so they have to travel through the entire city. In my experience, public transportation is the most convenient way to travel, because it takes too many hours to get there. Therefore, I would need a car to reduce this travel time to my job, and consequently I would buy a car for myself. If everybody thinks the way I did then we expect that there will be much more cars than ever before.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
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- Many people dream of owning their own business but are afraid of the risks Instead of starting a new business however one can buy a franchise A franchise is a license issued by a large usually well known company to a small business owner Under the 81
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- TOEFL T P O 2 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...long distances. No one would walk 10 km everyday to get to their office, they prefer per...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... growth is another factor in this case. Everyday a new person is born, and the populatio...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive on. However, these lands -or cities- wouldn’t be close to each other, and peo...
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Line 5, column 703, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sequently I would buy a car for myself. If everybody thinks the way I did then we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67039106145 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58638101386 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572625698324 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6930484366 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.619047619 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0476190476 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146831535683 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440888513319 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541329784077 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111811187531 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322112181346 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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