Use of internet
There are many different opinions about using internet.People manteins that young people are wasting their time with computer, smartphones, or tablets. Moreover they are losing a lot of thing in the fresh air.
On the one hand, internet's lovers said that internet was very important in the life becouse you can research for your schoolwork and homework. It also helps teenagers to widen their knowledge and improve their grades. On top of that you can practise foreing lenguages and connect between people are missing.
On the other hand, haters manteins that internet are making teenagers and childs addicted to online gaming. Therefore they waste to much time thuspeople have negative effect not only on their schoolwork also in excercise and social live.
For this reason boys and girls are unfriendly than old people.
To sum up, i consider that the gist of the matter it is that parents are not putting limits on their kids. Thus they are using bad the internet. Owing to internet is very usefull in the life given that help with a lot of things if you can put up with the correctly use.
I am of the opinion that it could help us in all the aspects of our lifes and it is easier to have the information than books as for is faster too.
With this in mind it is unquestionable that you will use internet in a hurry.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
There are many different opinions about using internet.People ma...
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Suggestion: People
...different opinions about using internet.People manteins that young people are wasting ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...with computer, smartphones, or tablets. Moreover they are losing a lot of thing in the f...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...s, or tablets. Moreover they are losing a lot of thing in the fresh air. On the one hand, i...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...s and childs addicted to online gaming. Therefore they waste to much time thuspeople have...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... to online gaming. Therefore they waste to much time thuspeople have negative effe...
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Suggestion:
...uch time thuspeople have negative effect not only on their schoolwork also in exc...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...friendly than old people. To sum up, i consider that the gist of the matter it...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s are not putting limits on their kids. Thus they are using bad the internet. Owing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as for, to sum up, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 235.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67234042553 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47248324193 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582978723404 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8654619508 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4615384615 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325596287981 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127196403917 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160466984837 0.0737576698707 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155544333645 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134249286784 0.0645574589148 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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