the way people dresses is a good indication of her or his personality or character. do you agree or not?
Throughout history, with the advent of technology and development of the fashion industry, people have paid more attention to what they wear and how they appear in society more than people who lived in the past. This matter whether cloths illustrate people’s personality is a controversial issue between individuals. I contend that classifying the people’s character based on their outfit is not rational. I will explicate my viewpoint through two outstanding reasons.
The first noteworthy point regarding this issue is that sometimes cloths which people wear is not optional and according to their interest because there are some rules in some societies that force people to wear specific dresses. For example, my country is a religious country, and people must follow the principles of Islam and wear hijab. Woman have to cover all parts of their body, and men are not allowed to wear what they want. It is an obligatory situation and there are strict laws for rebellious individuals. If people do not obey these rules, the government will punish them. Due to this circumstance, we can’t assume that all people have religious personality and judge them by their appearance
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples t 70
- TOEFL T P O 46 - Integrated Writing Task 100
- summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage. 3
- Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and e 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25130890052 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.877848122 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628272251309 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 618.680645161 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2346752549 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11740429133 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481720100665 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367456705024 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967746657675 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00187815975195 0.0645574589148 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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