what are the qualities of a good university? develop your position using illustrations and reasons
One of The rigid bases of developed countries is education, but , education carry a broad ranges of hence, I want to focus on academic education in this article specifically so , I mention some characteristics of a good university :
First, matter of curriculum ; it is a simple issue but it can be effect on many aspects of students life for instance , a difficult curriculum can cause anxiety for them and it becomes hard to follow and in the end it has no fruit unless , depression and other mental disorders.
Second, high skilled teacher ; it is obvious that an university is defined by its teacher , and in higher grades this become more important because they affect on students not only by their science but also, with their moral behavior . students will exemplify their teacher for themselves and it is critical to choose the carefully and with out prejudice.
Third, providing a wide range of extracurricular activities such as different festivals and ceremonies , holding fruitful symposiums,book reading gatherings and etc. these activities entertain students and may give them new notions and ideas about their future track and their personal and non-academic life and in the other hand it keeps them fresh mentally and physically.
In conclusion due to the aforementioned reasons in my point of view fit and useful curriculum at first and high-skilled teachers secondly and extracurricular activities finally, are the most important characteristics of a good university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 236.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30508474576 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18396238956 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652542372881 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.232149453 48.9658058833 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.666666667 100.406767564 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.3333333333 20.6045352989 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.0 5.45110844103 330% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0790898363291 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341191482783 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412830111752 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0473163963205 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496986907946 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 11.7677419355 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 58.1214874552 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.1575268817 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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