What is one thing you will do to improve your community?
Historically human have dwelled in a community which set them apart from the other species on earth. Communities have existed in different form and can be the epicenter for any grown civilization. Any community is made up of individuals who contribute towards the growth and well-being of the overall community. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether important activities enable community to develop or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that every social activities such as doing community service will provide fertile ground for society to improve. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to stance taken above is that in all around the world whole society need to be improved. In this way, although there is trials and tribulations, individuals can greatly contribute to improvement of society. Scientifically speaking, not until people bend over backwards can the society progress. As a matter of fact, vast majorities of people suffer from paucity of knowledge because they cannot afford to enroll in a prominent schools. Indeed, a plethora of people have to work along with their study, which makes it difficult for them to continue their education. Delving further into the issue reveal that, helping these people not only can motivate them in order to keep their incentive but also can patronize society in order to progress. In fact, it makes me feel satisfied and honored because not only will helping poor children enable me to enhance my self-esteem but also will provides an opportunity for me to gain much knowledge. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research in our country; show that this activity not only provide fertile ground for crowds of people to benefits from education but also provide an opportunity for community to reach the pinnacle of its days.
Moreover, it is establish beyond doubt that doing such a community service will definitely cause improving social skills. Broadly speaking, it goes without saying that vast majorities of people in the society are not able to interact with other properly. To put it in other word, not only will helping people with their education support people to achieve tertiary education but also will provide them how to contact with other people. I am of the opinion that in this way, I can greatly contribute to development of my society. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, doing some community service may not help society to progress effectively. In fact, other activities such as improvement of environmental issues like pollution or global warming and so forth, may have paramount effects on the progress of community. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, there are vast majorities of activities in which can patronize community to develop in different realm. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that contributing to poor people who are not able to benefits from eminent teacher and schools, not only will motivate them to keep on their education but also will greatly help improvement of community. Additionally, this kind of community work will certainly improve people's social skills.
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Essay evaluation report by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are trials'?
Suggestion: there are trials
...d to be improved. In this way, although there is trials and tribulations, individuals can great...
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Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'school'?
Suggestion: school
... cannot afford to enroll in a prominent schools. Indeed, a plethora of people have to w...
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Line 3, column 854, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...sfied and honored because not only will helping poor children enable me to enhance my s...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 926, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...to enhance my self-esteem but also will provides an opportunity for me to gain much know...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'established'.
Suggestion: established
...innacle of its days. Moreover, it is establish beyond doubt that doing such a communit...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... To put it in other word, not only will helping people with their education support peo...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot make those preceding benefits pale. To wrap it up, there are vast majorities...
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'apart from', 'broadly speaking', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21875 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.162828947368 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0707236842105 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0822368421053 0.046263068375 178% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0509868421053 0.0685040099705 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131578947368 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0411184210526 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92076129155 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0460526315789 0.0309702414327 149% => OK
Particles: 0.00164473684211 0.00188951952338 87% => OK
Determiners: 0.0674342105263 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0345394736842 0.0209618222197 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148026315789 0.0139019557991 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3462.0 2387.08602151 145% => OK
No of words: 555.0 408.028673835 136% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23783783784 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403603603604 0.338922669872 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326126126126 0.251872472559 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221621621622 0.174417080927 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.165765765766 0.112833075102 147% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92076129155 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473873873874 0.524397521467 90% => OK
Word variations: 56.5669360169 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8381764832 48.84282405 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.48 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 54.8126126126 45.7405998639 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.32222222222 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218965766032 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0906124257516 0.103427244359 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0547152401789 0.0752933317313 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.444133692081 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11797964968 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836393485293 0.114077575197 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569216288312 0.0781384742642 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.479083783386 0.336927656856 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0680562323202 0.067059652881 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180983762467 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352718310063 0.0618886996521 57% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are trials'?
Suggestion: there are trials
...d to be improved. In this way, although there is trials and tribulations, individuals can great...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'school'?
Suggestion: school
... cannot afford to enroll in a prominent schools. Indeed, a plethora of people have to w...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 854, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...sfied and honored because not only will helping poor children enable me to enhance my s...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 926, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...to enhance my self-esteem but also will provides an opportunity for me to gain much know...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'established'.
Suggestion: established
...innacle of its days. Moreover, it is establish beyond doubt that doing such a communit...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... To put it in other word, not only will helping people with their education support peo...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot make those preceding benefits pale. To wrap it up, there are vast majorities...
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'apart from', 'broadly speaking', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21875 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.162828947368 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0707236842105 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0822368421053 0.046263068375 178% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0509868421053 0.0685040099705 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131578947368 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0411184210526 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92076129155 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0460526315789 0.0309702414327 149% => OK
Particles: 0.00164473684211 0.00188951952338 87% => OK
Determiners: 0.0674342105263 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0345394736842 0.0209618222197 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148026315789 0.0139019557991 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3462.0 2387.08602151 145% => OK
No of words: 555.0 408.028673835 136% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23783783784 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403603603604 0.338922669872 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326126126126 0.251872472559 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221621621622 0.174417080927 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.165765765766 0.112833075102 147% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92076129155 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473873873874 0.524397521467 90% => OK
Word variations: 56.5669360169 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8381764832 48.84282405 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.48 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 54.8126126126 45.7405998639 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.32222222222 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218965766032 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0906124257516 0.103427244359 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0547152401789 0.0752933317313 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.444133692081 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11797964968 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836393485293 0.114077575197 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569216288312 0.0781384742642 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.479083783386 0.336927656856 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0680562323202 0.067059652881 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180983762467 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352718310063 0.0618886996521 57% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.