When choosing a place to live, what do you consider most important-location, size, style, number of rooms, types of rooms, or other features? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Choosing a place to live is one of the important decisions that every one have to take. Many factors are involved and every one has its own opinion. for me, location and the price in the house are important.
I have to go to work every day morning. there fore, the distance between my house and company should be as short as it possible. because i want to walk to my work or at least take a bus. Also, having shopping centers near my house is an other important factor that i should consider.
I spend a lot of time in my house. reading books, watching TV, cooking, sewing and so on. just at weekends i can go to picnic or visit my parent. there fore, the space of my house is important for me. If the light of the house is enough, it effects my morals and make me happy. having a pleasant rooms, beautiful furniture and flowers inside the rooms make the house the place that you want to stay and enjoy it. So, i try to pay attention to the amount of light and the number of windows it has.
The price of the house is another important factor. I cant rent a house or buy a house in expensive places, but situation in other places near the north of the city is satisfactory. People have proper behavior, the apartments are beautiful and convenient, streets and alleys are clean and many shopping centers for clothes or foods are located there, so, these places are appropriate and i can afford.
The number of rooms and their sizes are not really important and i don't care it. I believe that living in a small but beautiful house is more enjoyable than big houses. Location and price are two factors that include other features.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34269655457 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516447368421 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8639205168 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.45110844103 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106032533714 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325542367232 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390259552082 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652609032593 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245501255167 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.