When people move to another country, some of them decided to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Which one do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In general, the cultures and customs of different countries are exciting. Somehow, some customs are difficult to follow. It is holistically relying on the country and the people of that country how to treat with the customs. I prefer to follow the traditions of the new country. I feel this way for some reason. The following paragraphs will substantiate my statement.
To begin with, when a person migrates to another country, indeed, she/he is going to encounter new behaviors, traditions, rites, and rituals, which has never seen before. In this novel situation, there are two choices: first, to enjoy them and second, to reject them. But if I want to depict the place such as India that customs are very important, you have to follow the natives instead of neglecting them and annoying yourself. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. One of my friends has been lived in India for 4 years. She was against the praising the cows and loving them as a god. One day she did not respect to the cow which was crossing the street, that's why she had been beaten!
Secondly, by following new customs, we can take part in new ceremonies and rites. We can learn new information about that country, why people believe in those customs? What is the history of that country? What is the story of creating the customs? How do people think? Therefore, we can understand people better than before and make life more relaxed than before for ourselves. As an illustration, last week, I was watching a documentary film about the different traditions of Turkey. There is a city in Turkey that when foreigners enter that city, the people give their traditional clothes to them, and then they will be accepted by the natives. They believe that their city is holly and there is no other suitable for wearing except their attires.
As a final point, the bold reason for following new customs is personal interest. Some countries have entertainments which are their customs. For instance, New Mexico has a lot of dancing ceremonies that people all around the world come to the city to visit and corporate in these ceremonies.
In conclusion, customs ally people and make clear communication between them. I prefer to follow the new customs of the country instead of my own country’s customs because of letting myself learn new information, cultures, treats and making a new friend. Also, to have a comfortable life without any bothersome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in general, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87951807229 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68772039204 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53734939759 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.63233677 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3703703704 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387964258029 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980230113861 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696848977078 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223830664467 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664604688497 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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