"when people succeed it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success". Do you agree or disagree?explain.
Making progress and succeed in achieving something is not something dependent on one factor. There are many hidden layers conducting this process like chance and hardworking. It is obvious that both of these two factors are important for succeeding. I myself know some people who are really diligent but they are not in the position they should be. Because the luck percentage was not high enough. But if there is one preference I would choose hardworking. The reasons which support my idea are listed below.
First, Luck is not something predictable and reliable. You cannot waste your golden time doing nothing and wait for the great day when chance nocks your door. Even though chance has a key role in succession of many people you know, without trying the good chance would led to nothing. For example, some of my friends found their jobs by chance, but their effort for saving that position is undeniable.
Second, making up a clear aim and form out a program to achieve it is a safer way for improving. Really successful people have a well-arranged daily program and they follow a particular style of living which suit them best. But the most common thing in the life of popular successful people is that, their achievements are not gained by chance. They had made a lot of effort and never had been disappointed in their failure.
Third, Chance will not always lead to something you are really interested in. However, investing your time and energy for something you really like, shape a more favorable result. Getting anything after trying hard and thinking all nights long has always a better taste. For instance, trying very hard, I succeeded to go to university, so, it was really valuable for me.
In conclusion, there are many factors which are effective in accomplishing a particular goal. But still I think hardworking is the most important one. Because without trying hard other factors would not work anymore.
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- "when people succeed it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success". Do you agree or disagree?explain. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are not in the position they should be. Because the luck percentage was not high enough...
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Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...w, without trying the good chance would led to nothing. For example, some of my fri...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'had' and 'been'.
Suggestion: had never been
...ance. They had made a lot of effort and never had been disappointed in their failure. Third, ...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... hardworking is the most important one. Because without trying hard other factors would...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'third', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.186301369863 0.229887763892 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.180821917808 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104109589041 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0821917808219 0.046263068375 178% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0739726027397 0.0685040099705 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101369863014 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0657534246575 0.0351676179071 187% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.53998365235 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.013698630137 0.0309702414327 44% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00547945205479 0.00188951952338 290% => OK
Determiners: 0.0684931506849 0.0887237588012 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0164383561644 0.0209618222197 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013698630137 0.0139019557991 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1930.0 2387.08602151 81% => OK
No of words: 328.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88414634146 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362804878049 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225609756098 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149390243902 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109756097561 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53998365235 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 64.3175919338 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.9090909091 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5829816773 48.84282405 48% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 120.699889404 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.681818181818 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 37.4700665188 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.0487804878 1.45489161554 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157358699987 0.300154397459 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.05412435651 0.103427244359 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0485381713877 0.0752933317313 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.431109783277 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0913930005856 0.151897553556 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522303001627 0.114077575197 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337012139548 0.0781384742642 43% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.181161397229 0.336927656856 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0739933400037 0.067059652881 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966136793971 0.210909579961 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251603306191 0.0618886996521 41% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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