However, hardworking is one of the best features that a person should have, but I think just hardworking is not enough for succeeding, besides hardworking being smart and capable person is as much important as hardworking because in such world we are living in the world of machinery and technology, each government and companies are trying to do their works through easy possible way. For instance, the apple company is the inventor and promoter of new the technology if we analyze their activities we found that they are not working as hard as they work smartly.
I think the government should prioritize its activities according to the need of the country and deeply consider the economic, social and service delivery sectors and perform based on the conclusion of the analysis and I prefer that government should spend more many on infrastructures.
A boss must be sociable, by having this feature a supervisor will be able to know about the characteristic of the employee such as their capability and life level. supervisors must be educated and have adequate knowledge of modern management art because the management system has improved nowadays. A boss should obey rules because if the boss obeys rules the employee will obey rules likewise, I prefer bosses should be bossy in some circumstances.
- When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. 70
- Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 70
- What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important. 60
- When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 60
- Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld spend more many on infrastructures. A boss must be sociable, by having this ...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Supervisors
...uch as their capability and life level. supervisors must be educated and have adequate know...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, likewise, so, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1023255814 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91534052625 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586046511628 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.1794507265 48.9658058833 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.833333333 100.406767564 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8333333333 20.6045352989 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 5.45110844103 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0530275618142 0.236089414692 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246155934865 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229943631858 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0299564863121 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304239723092 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 11.7677419355 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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