When schools do not have enough funding or teachers, some people think physical education classes should be cut, while others believe that courses in art and music should be eliminated first. Which do you think is preferable, and why?
A school is needed for children to develop themselves and enhance their curriculum courses so that they can get good job according to their interest. In the era of 21st century, one should have knowledge about multiple field due to stand in highly competing environment among people of the globe. I agree with the statement that when schools do not have enough funding or teachers then physical education classes should be cut first rather than the art and music classes.
The first reason behind why I agree with the statement is that a multiple opportunity. If students have knowledge about art and music then they can earn money from that. For example, I have seen many people who had taken their degree in engineering or medicine but they turned out as famous musician or artist. A famous Indian actress Priyanka Chopara had same story. She had educated in medicine field and now she has became famous actress, singer, model, etc. Therefore, I believe that schools have to include these courses.
Furthermore, some time if we got stuck or bored with main curriculum courses and wants to break from our regular subjects then these art and music courses will help us for relaxing. For example, right now we are in critical situation of pandemic and every one tried some thing new during the lock down period. In this time we had seen people's overwhelming talent on social media. So if students are taught these courses in their school then they got knowledge about these courses and they will do more creative work with that as part of relaxing.
However, physical education classes also have important in student's life because if they will do physical exercise then they will healthier. Although physical exercise have significant effect in student life, I believe that music and art classes have more advantages. Because students can do the physical activity with help of their parents but it does not necessary that every parents should have knowledge about art and music.
To sum up, It can be reiterated that art and music classes are more productive for students to enhance their career than physical education classes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96100278552 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42060159435 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50139275766 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4349361208 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.764705882 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298517575998 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994202396836 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105136435153 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179764949856 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087683675305 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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