When we want good health conditions, physical activities are necessary. Some people like solo activities like running, work-out etc, others prefer to be in a group like team sports. Which do you prefer and why?
A physical activities are crucial when we talk about good health and there are many choices among them. I stand of the opinion that group exercises like team sports are better and I will explain why I feel like that in the subsequent paragraphs.
First, when we are involved is sports with numerous people we can create and retain substantial social contacts. Meeting many person can help you develop your communication skills. Moreover this leads to future interactions out of the particular sport. For instance when I was toddler my dad decided to involve me in the city martial art club. In the fragile age of seven, I practiced karate diligently 3 times per week. In the beginning I didn't like it and I wanted to resign, however after two months I craved to go even more often. The lessons required many of us to practice this amazing martial art together, which led to solid friendships and I am so thankful because I still keep in touch with some of the alumni.
Second being assemble with others when doing physical activities or sports can definitely be avail, due to people's help when necessary. Once we make something wrong, there is always partner to show you where you make wrong and to gives you advice. Each individual in certain area has different experience and knowledge, hence we can get proper information and recommendation in order to achieve our objectives. No one can deny that people learn from others when giving effort in physical activities.
In conclusion I would say that is undisputed more acceptable when we practice sports in group of people, because we can make robust connections and friendships likewise to get useful advice when we struggle accomplish our desire result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many people; many persons
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...e to get useful advice when we struggle accomplish our desire result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, so, still, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91065292096 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68119206212 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632302405498 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0255031344 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311916718225 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921342552523 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748344995223 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187847660187 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863565868068 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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