Which do you prefer with the same rate of pay an interesting and challenging job with less vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun

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Which do you prefer with the same rate of pay, an interesting and challenging job with less vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun?

Whether people should take an interesting yet difficult job with less vacation or a job with more vacation but less fun arouse a heated debate among job seekers. Although there are pros and cons for this statement, I personally prefer getting a career that is interesting but with less vacation. My reasons are as follows.

To begin with, mental health is an essential factor for me when I am choosing my career. Therefore, I prefer to acquire a job that is interesting due to the fact that it can enhance my mental health and make me happier. For instance, I am currently a white-hat hacker; I get paid 5 million NTD per month for penetrating an organization’s infrastructure and hunting for vulnerabilities in servers. As a matter of fact, my job is exceptionally intriguing because I need to address unpredictable yet fascinating problems all the time, such as guessing the correct password patterns, finding vulnerabilities in server misconfiguration, etc. As a result, even though I may need to arrive at my company during the summer vacation, I did not feel upset or stressed doing my tasks for once. On the other hand, I once joined an algorithm research laboratory at the National Institute of Research. I also earned 5 million NTD every month, but the research conducted in the institution was comparably advanced and demanding. To be more specific, before the paper submission deadline, I felt despondent every time I failed to complete my algorithm report. Therefore, despite the fact that my supervisor allowed me to take a break from July to September, I felt exceptionally exhausted during my work time, and this made me develope some mental health problems like melancholia.

Last but not least, I place an emphasis on efficiency in my work, and taking an exciting job with less vacation can undoubtedly improve my working efficiency. As an example, I once participated in a company called AIdea Technology as a machine learning engineer. My supervisor gave me 7 million NTD as a monthly salary, but he asked me to use the most state-of-the-art machine learning model to build a face-recognition machine. This newly-invented model is alluring because it required precise calculation of the curve of human’s facial expression change. Therefore, I become attentive when researching this topic. In addition, my boss did not grant me to take a two-week spring break, so I had no choice but to concentrate on my model-training mission during the break. Consequently, I finished constructing a face-recognition model with 90% accuracy in no more than a week. Contrarily, I was a TA in the Theory of Deep Learning Laboratory when studying at National Taiwan University. My salary was 7.5 million NTD, and I was permitted to take a break at the end of the semester. Nonetheless, grading students’ assignments and examinations were so tedious that I often procrastinated until the day before the deadline. So according to my experience, having a fun job without any vacations increases my productivity.

In conclusion, I prefer getting a job that is interesting but with less vacations due to the aforementioned reasons. After all, I am really concerned about my mental health and working efficiency.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to engineer'
Suggestion: to engineer
... AIdea Technology as a machine learning engineer. My supervisor gave me 7 million NTD as...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to model'
Suggestion: to model
... most state-of-the-art machine learning model to build a face-recognition machine. Th...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vacations is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ting a job that is interesting but with less vacations due to the aforementioned rea...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, nonetheless, really, so, therefore, after all, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2693.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09073724008 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33440281679 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52741020794 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 859.5 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5139539043 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.72 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.16 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269710060549 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811510373999 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133712507497 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253912371261 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163955379871 0.0645574589148 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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