In modern society, it is believed that we can make friends in various way. The best method to make new friends has given a concern to the masses. Some people hold the view of point that participating in community activities is the most beneficial, others advocate to build friendship through traveling. However, from my perspective, I prefer to joining a sports team, which can offer the best opportunities to the individual on making news friends.
First of all, participating in community activities sometimes is not suitable for every student. It is conceivable that if you live in a big community, you can easily grab the precious opportunities to participant in activities, such as BBQ, flea market, etc. with your neighborhood. But for instance, for students in China, it is acknowledged by the public that they all pressured by the school work and posses little time after school to be committed to the community. In addition, different society structure incurs different outcome. With more tall building setting up on all corners of the city, people is living in small family, and the community is mainly composed by strangers, who even never say “Hello”to each other. In a living condition with people indifferent to others, it is also difficulty to assemble people to join activities in community.
Moreover, traveling is also inappropriate for students to make news friends. Students often participant in some traveling during their vocation, but at most situation, to some extent, making friends in traveling is risky. It is not uncommon that travelers become deceived by strangers during their trip. Needless to say, many people lose money on the grounds that they have faith in their delicate and tempting words. Being away from hometown, students should pay attention the surroundings and develop their ability to taking care of themselves, so they’d better accompany with familiar classmates, and enjoy their traveling.
Eventually, joining a sports team must be the best way to build sound friendship with others. Students always join one sports team of their own interest, so it is more possible to meet others with same interest and can have resonance of a topic. Being in a sports team, they will be guaranteed more chances to interact with each other and form strong relation, especially when they are preparing for the competition. During the process, they will fight for the same target, share happiness and release depression with each other. They can achieve better understanding with each other, and finally easily form a tacit agreement. I will never forget the memory that I play football with my classmates together, and owing to this experience, I appreciate the friendship gained from this very much. The effect of common goal in the sports team is undeniable, and it indeed can be beneficial to the friendship.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that joining a sports team should be the best way to develop new friendship with others for students. And the relationship will never fade in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'join'?
Suggestion: join
...wever, from my perspective, I prefer to joining a sports team, which can offer the best...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., but at most situation, to some extent, making friends in traveling is risky. It...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15308151093 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90953034778 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512922465209 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 779.4 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4027437239 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.68 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.12 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310788337835 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832035577223 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737342328557 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181768905031 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789451691831 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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