Which of the following do you think contribute most to an enjoyable vacation:
1. good food 2. good location 3. good friends to travel with. Select one and give
your reasons.
Traveling is one of the most pleasant activities for human-kind. But the question is that how to make your vacation more interesting? There are many factors that affect our experience of vacation namely food, location, and the ones you are spending time with. But from my perspective, good friends who acompany you in your vacation is havig the most effect. good friend can be the cause of best memories in the light of the following reasons.
First of all, being with good friends equals to having a lot of fun. When friends come together they always tell funny things and laugh together. Besides, you can play some board games with no one but your best friends. You probably went some kind of vacation with your friends but to illustrate my point let me tell you a little story. Last year I went to a vacation conducted by the university in which a couple of my best friends were present. We took a train to the destination which was a long ride, about 10 hours. You may think that was a boring wait to arrive there but on the contrary, because of my friends, the long ride became the most enjoyable part of our trip. We talked together and played our favorite board game all the way; we even didn’t feel how the time passed! However, it would be unfair not to mention the fact that as much as the good friends can improve the quality of your trip, the bad ones can make your trip worse. Thus, you should always keep an open eye on with who you are going vacation.
Secondly, good friends are the ones who cooperate with you during the vacation. This results in more convenience dealing with different kind of works in vacation. Consequently, by more convenience you would enjoy more out of your vacation. In the other words, the duties which is hard to do in a vacation, will be divided between the friends in the vacation; hence you are way more comfortable with it. Imagine a group of friends going to a long-distance trip together by their private car. Therefore, they must drive dozens of hours which is absolutely annoying. But they can change the driver in every two or three hours and thus they will not get tired. Furthermore, one should not forget that even if just one person drives all the way, by presence of his friends, he would not get tired as much. So, friends can bring you more convenience in the trip which leads to more enjoyable trip.
In conclusion, due to the aforementioned reasons, it is strongly believed that having good friends can positively affect how much you enjoy your vacation. If you enjoy your vacation, you will be more efficient when going back to the work after vacation.
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- Which of the following do you think contribute most to an enjoyable vacation 1 good food 2 good location 3 good friends to travel with Select one and give your reasons 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Good
...your vacation is havig the most effect. good friend can be the cause of best memorie...
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Line 1, column 388, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...st effect. good friend can be the cause of best memories in the light of the following ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58085106383 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44832607888 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491489361702 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2130246721 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.12 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35689106917 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107107798408 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789080608008 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245667652175 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256968051604 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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