Which one do you prefer:
(1) a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting project but fewer vacation days
(2)another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but more vacation days
Finding a willing job is always a big question for workers, they need to make a deliberate tradeoff between work-life-balance and the perspective job. There is a classical problem that asks whether is it better to choose a company with challenging and interesting projects along with less vacation days or another company offering quiet bland and easier projects but more vacation days. As far as I am concerned, I recommend the latter one, and here are my reasons.
To begin with, for those ordinary people, working for a company is the mean to achieve a freedom life, not only for financial or physical freedom. Selecting the job provides few vacations day contradicts this idea. To be specific, if we work in a company lack of vacations, spending almost all of the time to accomplish the project, we are becoming a slave of money. By contrast, if we work in the company with more free time, then we have more time to accompany our family or go travel, which can better enjoy the freedom procured from hard-working.
Furthermore, a less interesting job in the company does not means a boring life. Besides the work, we can achieve in a promising future by developing extra hobby and extending relationship. Take my brother Tom as an example. He is a government employee who has regular work hours and comparatively abundant of vacations. Therefore, he is able to join the tennis club and cooking course. In these activities after work, he not only can learn new skills but also extend his friendship, so life is more colorful than other people who always work overtime.
Admittedly, career occupied a great portion of people's life, thus is also substantial to work in an interesting environment. However, the decisive factor for an interesting or challenging environment varied, sometimes an intensive atmosphere results in a feeling of boring; a challenge project will also degrade to boring stuff after a long hour of work. After all, the vacation time is what you can wholly control by yourself.
To sum up, according to the points I mentioned above, I suggest people to choose a job not so interesting but with more free time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...pany lack of vacations, spending almost all of the time to accomplish the project, we are ...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...interesting job in the company does not means a boring life. Besides the work, we can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, after all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89978895163 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589531680441 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8964688054 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.823529412 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312610010245 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871075533349 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978662123541 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171502463933 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931331141771 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.