From my point of view, the lessons parents learn from their children are as much as the lessons children learn from parents.
When we talk about the lessons parents learn from their children, what will come to us is the brave decisions children make because the young always stand for revolution. The young have not experienced the difficulties their parents had met, so they tend to be brave enough to explore the unknown world and experience new things. For example, one of my friends named Calvin chose to be a musician in college, while his parents thought that the traditional job, such as engineering, would be a better job in the future. But Calvin decided to be successful in music, and he would try his best. After graduating from college, he became a bit famous as time went on and has earned more than most of his friends who major in engineering. As a result, his parents learned something about dreams and courage from their son.
All in all, parents often learn something from their innovative children. However, this is not to deny the importance of lessons children learn from their parents. On the contrary, children could avoid many difficulties if they listen to their parents.
Now let’s talk about the lessons children learn from their parents. It’s valuable that the experience parents had learned from their life, so they hope that their children could avoid those mistakes they had made before. For example, one of my friends called Adam gets parents who were not good at studying due to video games addiction. Thus, his parents always told him that he could only get an excellent job by working hard because his parents cannot get a satisfying salary due to the failure in the study. As a result, Adam always works hard and gets the highest score in college. I think that’s why he could do so well in his career now.
To sum up, parents could learn some lessons from their creative children, while their children could learn the same amount of significant experience from their parents.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Which one of the following options is a better choice to help you gain confidence when speaking in the classroom the community and the workplace Why Practicing your speech before the presentation Using techniques and methods Learning from other experience 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, i think, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81034482759 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3878670614 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0281954715 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4705882353 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963832556761 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408898560203 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311546475929 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747466805255 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184954798396 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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