With a shadow of a doubt, characteristics formed in childhood can play a pivotal role in channeling people's mindsets when they grow up. A glance at people's attitude towards values needed to form in childhood brings to a light question, namely, which is the most important value to share with a child, being helpful, being honest, or being well organized. Were I forced to choose, I would prefer being honest to the other two options and I will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first reason worth mentioning is that being honest is the most important virtue a person ought to own. To illustrate more, being honest not only can help people build up friendships and form a healthy social circle, but also contribute to their triumphs in careers. According to children, being honest is also wholesome to their growth. An honest child, more often than not, is welcomed by other children, which can conversely help him become self-confident. On the other hand, if a child is excluded due to his cheating behavior, he may be inclined to become depressed and incapable to embrace others again, which will eventually form a vicious cycle to his growth.
Another significant reason why I hold this opinion is that being honest can help children have a more comfortable life. Quite different from adults, children lack the ability to be aware of their needs and upcoming issues comprehensively which are necessary to contemplate as soon as possible. There are many examples that children conceal accidents caused by their curiosity but finally lead to irreversible damage. Take my personal experience as a compelling example, when I was in primary school, I enjoyed playing soccer with my friends. One day my ankle was broken by accident in a soccer game, but I chose to conceal the truth to my parents for I was afraid that they might prohibit me from playing soccer again. Unfortunately, my uncomfortable walking gesture exposed my injury to my mom, and she immediately brought me to the hospital to scrutinize meticulously. It was crystal clear that if I insisted on concealing the truth, my ankle might not recover completely.
A voice arises that being helpful or well organized is much more important, for they can bring more positive outcomes in the future career. However, this claim ignored the difficulty of learning to be honest in adults. It is the most precious time for children to develop this kind of virtue because they are pure and innocent enough to accept being honest. As age marches on, all adults have to face complicated social problems, which may prevent them from being honest. On the other hand, being helpful or well organized is a behavior that can learn in any place at any time.
In conclusion, drawing upon the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly hold the opinion that being honest is the most important value that parents should share with children. While there are one hundred Hamlets in one hundred people's eyes, I firmly believe that my opponents will yield after being shown to my article.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 15.1003584229 245% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2536.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91472868217 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70111938105 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529069767442 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 787.5 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6178613329 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.272727273 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413872239447 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12755649655 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102794916216 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259751199165 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965128884789 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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