Working effectively has always been an important matter for human beings, and there are a lot of factors which can affect that issue. In this regard, some people believe that people can achieve their best productivity while they are working in a calm environment’s condition. Some others think that allocating rewards can have the most significant impact on people’s productivity. I personally have enough reasons to prefer that interest can overcome all other factors. I will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, interest is the most essential interior impetus for everyone, which can motivate people to go forward as much as possible. As a matter of fact, people will be able to gain everything they want in their careers, if they really like it. In other words, when people are interested in their works, they have the desire to know all new things about it. Therefore, they understand all new methods with which they can improve their works’ condition, which will lead to more productivity for individuals. As a way of illustration, take professors in universities. If they like their profession, they assign a considerable amount of time to their research. In addition, they work effectively to use recently established theories to publish better one in their fields of study.
Secondly, awards can be a good motivation for people to do their works well, but it will not last for a long time and will lose its importance over the time. To be more exact, when people receive the best possible reward, there will remain no impetus for them to continue their tries. As a result, getting rewards should not be considered as the most noticeable factor of improving people’s productivity. Take those professors, for example. When they achieve the best possible prize, they will not continue to make their research better. Whereas, if they have an interest in science, they will work hard to develop it.
Thirdly, if people are interested in their works, nothing can distract them from doing it well, even if they are in environment with load sounds. To clarify this point, there is an old proverb says: “If people desperately want to do some things, nothing can stop them from achieving their purposes.” As a result, I believe that noisy circumstances are only a pretext for those who are not passionate enough about their works.
To sum up, all things considered, I firmly believe that being passionate about works, which means people are interested in their duties is the most significant factor for being productive. Given the fact that, not only is interior interest the most important incentive for everyone, but also it can overcome all other factors according to the above-mentioned arguments.
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- TPO 55 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, as a matter of fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9822616408 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75513323467 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485587583149 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1455158112 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4761904762 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166819802443 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620806939629 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032461648584 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107520908015 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029374043853 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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