Which transportation vehicle has changed people’s lives?
In ancient time, people used horses for transportation. Nowadays, by progressing of transportation, people have a variety of choices for transportation such as automobile, train, subway, airplane and bus. In my opinion, subway is the most important transportation vehicles which has changed people’s lives. My reasons are as follows.
First of all, subway is a best vehicle to arrive to a destination faster. For example, if I would like to go to the city center by my own car, it takes two hours, due to (because of) the heavy(high) traffic. Moreover, I have to find a parking space to leave my car which wastes my time. While, I can save my time by using subway without having any stress.
Second, subway is a comfortable vehicle to move around the city. I used the subway to go to my university a few years ago. I remembered that I read my favorite story book in a cool weather and sometimes I took a rest when I felt tired. Moreover, I was (or felt) more convenient to catch up on my daily tasks such as sending an E-mail, eating a snack, while I used the subway. Nevertheless, by driving, I could not have a rest along the way.
Third, subway is safer. For instance, there is no being or causing accident. In contrast, by using a car, we must expect facing any accident. Even if we ourselves drive carefully, there are such guys who drive carelessly. Thus, using the subway can lower the rate of driving accidents.
In conclusion, without a doubt, subway is a safe, convenient and faster vehicle which has changed our lives and we can choose it as a transportation vehicle to move.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... as follows. First of all, subway is a best vehicle to arrive to a destination...
^
Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e to leave my car which wastes my time. While, I can save my time by using subway wit...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, third, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66784452297 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90634270243 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7024303674 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5263157895 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8947368421 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.31578947368 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22063146438 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658627549415 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131736395031 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15388708805 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159254493429 0.0645574589148 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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